How sad. It would be nice if there was a second chapter. I know that the guy she sees there is most likely Lyle, but it would be cool if it were really Neil and he just got amnesia. Anyway I hope you continue this story.

-Saph

Great look into Feldt's POV on Lockon. The ending's cherry on the cake where Lyle comes. I don't care if it's AU, it's beautiful as it is.

I considered this story as a cliffhanger, knowing that she just ran away from Lyle. Hm... is it perhaps that this fanfic dedicated to LylexFeldt or something cause if you actually continue with this one, perhaps this will be... but then again, I only rooted for Lockon (neiL)and Feldt and that's what! Hehehe

I love your story. I find them intriguing now since season one and I am quite sad by the fact that Feldt started liking Setsuna now in Season two (I am not a fan though)... hopefully, you will continue with this one. I felt like I want to read this anyway. Heheh

Very beautiful pacing in this story. I like your characterization of Feldt and her thoughts on Lockon and his role in her life. I also liked the Tieria parallel, I must admit that thought never crossed my mind before. Thanks for the great read :).

I love the story and the idea since Feldt and Neil is my favourite pairing :) .

The words are amusing . I like it . Simple and easy but refreshing .

But , i don't really like the format . You need to make more space .

Well ,that's opinion .

xoxo

Chanellia

I liked this story. I think it describes Feldt wonderfully. I wonder how similar she really is to Tieria (in this story of course). Either way, it would stand well as a oneshot but I think it would be interesting if you continued.

-Sky