 The Breeze 2009-04-05 . chapter 1Absolutely brilliant, and near perfect. Might actually be perfect, but I can't help thinking that while Season Two Roslyn might kill Caprica's baby, Season Four's Roslyn wouldn't...if only out of a sense of loyalty to Tigh. |
 Grey V 2009-04-04 . chapter 1Wow, this is excellent. Your dialogue and inner Roslin voice are both perfect, and I love the contrast between the four scenes.
I especially enjoyed the idea that Roslin and Ishay killed Liam -- Ishay did seem more than a bit suspicious during the last few episodes, didn't she? This makes a lot more sense than "killed by The Power Of Love", that's for sure.
I was glad you gave Cavil a funeral, also. I thought it was more than a little strange for Ellen to go "Looks like my 'treasured' sons are all dead now. Oh, well, whatever, I won't mention it or anything. Let's go camping!" :P Tory, too -- the fact that nobody seems to care that Tyrol choked her to death is bizarre! I mean, sure, she wasn't popular, but come on.
At any rate, great job! I think I'll add your fic to my personal canon. :) |