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whirlergirl
2009-12-22 . chapter 24
Oh my god!
Why does Josh have to be so... horrible?!! That's just plain weird and plain disgusting. I was really hoping he was going to be a decent guy. My mistake.
I really hope that the so called quote from Troy isn't true and ohmygosh, just PLEASE update soon and explain everything!
Much love,
whirlergirl .x.
Annabelle
2009-12-21 . chapter 24
Um... What?

Rape is a serious, disgusting, heinous crime. It destroys lives and tears people apart. It's not something you wash away in the shower and "don't have time" to deal with because you're late for picking someone up at JFK.

This should have been dealt with much more seriously.

Everyone's attitude was much too lax. Gabriella had more concern for ruining Ashely's relationship than for protecting her friend from a rapist.
kellyharper
2009-12-21 . chapter 24
Please let troy come back & save her!
Kelly
hms fan
2009-12-21 . chapter 24
f*ing b*d i cant believe he did that to gabi what am a** hole i hope she tell ash but i dont think shes going to believe her tbh & i hope troy come back & kicks his sorry butt butt he probably gonna turn against her too poor gabi please dont let even more hurt over this i think troy needs to come home or transfer gabi to london with him where shell be safe

Fu**ing josh i HATE hom so much im so mad right now i wana kick his sorry loser **

awesome job update soon
hms fan
2009-12-21 . chapter 23
aw that was so cute the roses&the kittie loved it nhope they will be ok though i hope this year goes quickly for them
Clembo29
2009-12-17 . chapter 23
Loved it!
whirlergirl
2009-12-07 . chapter 23
Aww. So that's kind of cute. :)
I really don't see a very good reason why he can't call or email or something. It doesn't make sense. Aunt troubles? Oh well, that's just plain weird.
BUT we all know that he's never gonna be wtih anyone else and I am PRAYING that Gabi wont want to be with anyone else either...
Interesting chapter,
Update soon!
whirlergirl .x.
kellyharper
2009-12-06 . chapter 23
I don’t think that we’re going to see each other again after...well that year. Does that mean that he's not coming back @ all? And if so, what did he mean by this-
I don’t want you to put your life on hold just because we can’t be together right now. Because it sounds like he plans on coming back. I'm confused, please help! I don't want them apart forever. Does this mean that this story is ending? I hope not.
Kelly
whirlergirl
2009-12-06 . chapter 22
Thanks for updating!
This was really cute and I am so glad that Troy came back! Knew it!
Anyway, what is with this aunt person?? Grr, seriously I totally hate her now man.
I REALLY want to know what the hell was going through Troy's mind while he WASN'T contacting Gabi for TWO MONTHS?! Does the aunt or his father have anything to do with this?
Update soon!
whirlergirl .x.
hms fan
2009-12-06 . chapter 22
aww im glad troy went loved it update soon
itscassieelee
2009-12-05 . chapter 22
This story is so hot. I lovee it. You are a great writer. Please continue. <33
kellyharper
2009-12-05 . chapter 22
loved it, but please tell me that the reason he hasn't called is because of another woman. I hate cheaters! I want this to be happy again soon. Don't get me wrong, I love it, but it's hard to have a troyella when they are in different countries.
Kelly
whirlergirl
2009-11-11 . chapter 21
Um why hasn't Troy been responding?!
He better watch out. If I were Gabi he had better had been busy for his OWN sake.
Seems like alittle somethings going on between Ashley and Chuck... please say he is a nice guy and not some skeez.
Update soon!
whirlergirl .x.
Clembo29
2009-11-09 . chapter 21
Loved it!
hms fan
2009-11-08 . chapter 21
AW i hope troy gets in touch soon awesome job update soon
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