Seems fine. The other reviews are right

Cool! Man I wish I was Gemini...but alas I am a Virgo... yeah I know...But love your story! Two-Face is awesome... hehe... :D

Great story. I like the way it's a one sided conversation, but you still get hints of the other side. THe ending was great, too.

"The burglar...well, I suppose he got pistol whipped too, in a way...with a bullet. In the brain." Nice line.

i have absolutely no criticism for this. great story. perhaps you could make a series like this on other villains' henchmen/women.

...That was a giggle fit inducing moment right thar. Schist, man, they were very lucky. xDD
-compiles list on how to make Two-Face mad- Steal his left socks. Only his left.
Live on 11th street in apartment 1001 with 11 fish.
(>_>)

interesting, very interesting
one thing i like about your fics is that you're very adamant about making your characters realistic, they have flaws and they're good at things and this is just cool over all
looking forward to whatever comes next

*claps* YAY! I love this!