I...wow...this is a very well written story. Your use of langauge is frankly something I have never seen before. It's not just the words you have used, it is the way you have used them. I aplaude your use of both unfamiliar and familiar words to create a definite picture in the readers mind. Your skill in bending and describing seemingly ordinary things is truly extraordinary. Although there's not much action, it's well worth the read.

Aw~ This was a much sweeter fic than I imagined it to be. I love how you REALLY went into detail with this one. It's like one paragraph described one part of the room whilst another paragraph described the other. It's was a good way to help the reader get the whole picture.

I also liked the relationship between the two sisters. It's so cute and playful, just like the anime. The ending was very sweet. It makes me want to hug Cornelia as well! XD Good job, man. This was a great read, especially at this hour. (It's 5:14 A.M. XD) I can't wait to read more of your Code Geass fics! <3

The characterization in this fic is superb. I quite enjoyed reading it. Thank you for writing it.