Nice ending ...

good story. a little short but i liked it. I just wanted to point out that, in chapter 1 where you talked about Randy Shughart and Gary Gordon, they did not received the silver star, but the medal of honor.
http://en./wiki/Gary_Gordon

http://en./wiki/Randy_Shughart

these links are to their wikipedia page.

short but very good!

Great story! Nice interlude as well!

i love it!

Nice character building ... I loved how you portray Teresa, understanding yet lonely and wow! a sensitive side of Mack! Nice!!

Wonderful beginning! Very authentic sounding!

Great tag!! I was curious if you were going to continue. You have a lot of good stuff that is going to make your readers wonder. (I didn't look to see if it was in progress or not). I love Unit stories and am surprised that more people don't pick up were the series left off.

So glad to find a new story from you Tlep. Thanks!

i love it!