|Reviews for Entangled Destinies|
| averagepanda 3/20/10 . chapter 6
This is Ok. I like the plot :) But i don't think that I need to read the same scene twice. I like the story, but WHEN WILL YOU UPDATE! That might be harsh, but hey, I wouldn't want updates if I didn't like the fanfic
| PurpleIris 1/30/10 . chapter 5
I suggest switching the sequence of Chapter 5. Put the scenes in chronological order; I was a little confused/tizzy. Love your crossover, BTW!
| StarofCalamity 11/27/09 . chapter 6
Cool, Simon is my fav mortal instruments charatcer
| Forever Reading aka meg 10/19/09 . chapter 6
ABOUT TIME YOU UPDATED!
I love what you've done with it but Edward thinking of stuff like that? I thought this was T rated? ;) Never mind I like M as much as the next peoson if you diside to change it.
What I can't wrap my head around is where is Jace fitting in because I don't think your one of those writers who end up with a happy threesom.
| mortal girl 10/3/09 . chapter 6
love the story...
you should continue writing[:
update SOON please :D
| i-ain't-bovvered 9/1/09 . chapter 6
Ack! A cliffie! Am interested to see how the story turns out...and Jace's reaction when he finds Clary...heh. So keep writing!
PS: Am also very excited for Simon's story:)
| SassieSherri 8/31/09 . chapter 6
Well worth the wait ladies, I loved it. Edward was hilarious. I like how you brought Jace back. Can't wait for more!
Ari: Happy B-day, hugs, kisses and more**! Have a couple drinks for me.
Brooke: “The Backdoor Man” enough said. Love ya Bitch!
| meg 7/26/09 . chapter 5
PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE, UPDATE!
What is with people not updating in ages today!
Sorry for ranting! but seriusly have you completly forgoten your story!
| nunya 7/24/09 . chapter 5
WR ITE MORE!
| osocurly 6/5/09 . chapter 5
OME love it! update soon
| WyJacksMommy 6/3/09 . chapter 5
love this story! Please, please, please continue :)
| teddiesxturtles 6/3/09 . chapter 5
cool story. :
| alybee 5/26/09 . chapter 5
Hey Sistas - seems like you had fun with your research on Italy. You have done a nice job moving back and forth between Edward and Clary's POV. It will be interesting to see how it turns out.
| meg 5/22/09 . chapter 4
Please keep going!
| TheLlamasWillTakeOverTheWorld 5/16/09 . chapter 4
i love how each chapter is long! :]
i have to say, at the moment i am prefering the whole mortal instruments part better at the moment cause i only started/finished the series recently and you did a really good job with Clary's POV.
I like how we learn like both of their (Clary/Edward) stories before they meet.
i noticed u haven't updated in like a month...
so... UPDATE SOON! :-D
Quick question though, Is Sebastion Evil and/or Clary's Brother in this story?
and Is Jace really Clary's Brother? I was going to suggest they get a DNA test but would it come up the same considering Jace/Clary both have angel blood?
wow that was a really long review! Update soon!