This is Ok. I like the plot :) But i don't think that I need to read the same scene twice. I like the story, but WHEN WILL YOU UPDATE! That might be harsh, but hey, I wouldn't want updates if I didn't like the fanfic

I suggest switching the sequence of Chapter 5. Put the scenes in chronological order; I was a little confused/tizzy. Love your crossover, BTW!

Cool, Simon is my fav mortal instruments charatcer

update soon

ABOUT TIME YOU UPDATED!

I love what you've done with it but Edward thinking of stuff like that? I thought this was T rated? ;) Never mind I like M as much as the next peoson if you diside to change it.

What I can't wrap my head around is where is Jace fitting in because I don't think your one of those writers who end up with a happy threesom.

love the story...

you should continue writing[:

update SOON please :D

Ack! A cliffie! Am interested to see how the story turns out...and Jace's reaction when he finds Clary...heh. So keep writing!

PS: Am also very excited for Simon's story:)

Well worth the wait ladies, I loved it. Edward was hilarious. I like how you brought Jace back. Can't wait for more!

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-Sass

PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE, UPDATE!

What is with people not updating in ages today!

Sorry for ranting! but seriusly have you completly forgoten your story!

WR ITE MORE!

OME love it! update soon

love this story! Please, please, please continue :)

cool story. :

Hey Sistas - seems like you had fun with your research on Italy. You have done a nice job moving back and forth between Edward and Clary's POV. It will be interesting to see how it turns out.

Please keep going!

Hey,

AWESOME STORY!

i love how each chapter is long! :]

i have to say, at the moment i am prefering the whole mortal instruments part better at the moment cause i only started/finished the series recently and you did a really good job with Clary's POV.

I like how we learn like both of their (Clary/Edward) stories before they meet.

i noticed u haven't updated in like a month...

so... UPDATE SOON! :-D

Quick question though, Is Sebastion Evil and/or Clary's Brother in this story?

and Is Jace really Clary's Brother? I was going to suggest they get a DNA test but would it come up the same considering Jace/Clary both have angel blood?

wow that was a really long review! Update soon!