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TaijiyaSango23
2009-10-09 . chapter 7
PLEASE! UPDATE! I IS WANT 2 READ!
Nemesia
2009-09-18 . chapter 7
Your story is awsome. I wish you will update it soon. Can't wait for next chapter. Please update it soon... ^^
Elena
2009-08-03 . chapter 7
Great story.
O hope you will update soon.
bzwitme23
2009-07-12 . chapter 7
Please keep writing soon!! I'm dying to see the reactions of Shinichi and Ran and Kaito later on please!!
alkyone
2009-07-07 . chapter 7
New chapter, how great :)
Kaito had very nice dream :D Although until the fairy Ran has arrived I thought that it was this school performance. It would be hard to minimalize Ran to four-inch tall whoever. As a dream it was nice and it provide that Kaito really feel something to Aoko, why would he dream about her otherwise?
I can't wait to know what would he think about Aoko when he will get to known her better. It would be not only her cute look, but he would have to faced her fiery temper (which I belive he could wake in her)...
There isn't anything which sounds as "boredom" between twins I guess... I couldn't stop smiling when I've read about binary system... It reminded me old joke: "There are 10 kinds of people in the world, those who understand binary numbers, and those who don't." XD I think you (I mean Shin'ichi) explain binary and hexadecimal numbers very well (even if I have problem with understand the code after the chapter it still good work). Shin'ichi would be grateful to Kaito for that kind of challenges, he could wake his brain before school :)
Oh, and I forget to write it last time, I like Kaito's nicknames. All of them suits him perfectly XD
Can't wait for next chapter. So wish you lot of free time XD

PS. Don't worry about not replying, I thought that you probably wouldn't have enough of free time. I have this same problem even during holiday...
PS2. My friend Albireo, said that she thought this same about new chapter and she signed up beneath my review with all of her four limbs XD So cheers from both of us.
66ButterflyOfDarkness99
2009-06-23 . chapter 6
Yay!! I love the KaitoxAoko scenes! <3 Maa~ Shinichi is finally starting to like Ran a bit more, mmh?? ^^
Can't wait for the next chapter! 8D *pops in lots of cookies*
alkyone
2009-06-22 . chapter 6
Great story. I really like your Ran, and especially twins. Ran is so much like her. She cares of her best friend so much, even when his behaviour may hurt her. I like Shinichi's seriousness, and Kaito's slight childish behaviour.
It's hard to say more about Aoko, because there wasn't a lot clues about her character yet, but I hope in next chapters we could know more about her. I'm curious if Kaito really thought about fact, that he pretending to be Shinichi and even if Aoko started to like him, she would think he practically is his brother (I hope that sentence only look weird, but is understandable).
Well I can't wait for next part. I shoult thank my friend Albireo, who showed me your story :)
Cheers,
Kione.

PS: My friend, Albireo asked me to add from her, that she is delighted to know that you put more Kaito/Aoko scenes and that she can't wait :)

PS2: Sorry for bad english. I hope there wasn't any problems with understand what I mean, even if it's not grammaticaly correct.
Hanisakura
2009-06-21 . chapter 6
I really love your story ..interesting.Good job!Can't wait what happen next.Update soon..
albireo
2009-06-14 . chapter 5
Well first idea of Kaito and Shin'ichi as a twins was a little strange for me, but when I started to read first chapter I've hange my mind. It's brilliant story and I can't wait for next parts. I love it, I hope it would be more Aoko/Kaito inside. No complaining, just a hope :)
Wish you lots of ideas and much free time to write them :)
Ps. Sorry for bad english...
Lizzie07
2009-05-29 . chapter 5
Year! you updated again =)
But one thing is wondering me. How come Kaitou can get along being himself, when he is Shinichi without anyone getting suspicious, while the real Shinichi has to be a little careful around Ran and Sonoko?

Update soon (= the story is getting better and better (0=
windtamer01
2009-05-13 . chapter 4
hahaha! XD I think kaitou hadn't fell for ran in a deep way, had he?
because his regret does not have any profound feelings embedded in the dialogues.

Uhm.. I noticed a lack of 'thoughts' in significant scenes.. and.. thoughts should be italicized..

it was not that long.. your 4th chapter, I mean.. but like I've told you.. in MS word, it DOES look long. lol.

what else.. hmm.. I'll expect a few twist in the upcoming chapters ^^ good work, anak! hehehe,
hayella
2009-05-12 . chapter 4
I won't consider sad to be exact:) At most Kaito by all means have the chance to confess to Aoko already:)
Good story!
Lizzie07
2009-05-12 . chapter 4
Love it, Love it, Love it! <3 (0=(^.^)
Keep on going and update soon pleas (=
A Midsummer Night's Dream
2009-05-12 . chapter 4
Oh, so Kaito had a crush on Ran before?...interesting.UPDATE SOON!
khimi17
2009-05-11 . chapter 4
nice story, keep up the good work na lang, antayin q ult ung next chap. ^_^
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