This is a really good story and i really like it. its cute and sweet and really romantic. you are a very good writer. i just started reading commander in chief fanfictions and it's really fun. yours are really good! do you have any tips for a writer who is just starting out?

-kara

Nice story! It's always nice to read some Rod/Mac. I also would love to see an update to your other story, but I realize real life has a way of making time for writing difficult.

Love it! Like everything you do!

I love this kind of story and while I'm sure you don't have much time anymore, I would love to see it more!

There's not any critism I can give you with a story like this, you can't go wrong with a good Mac/Rod love fic! :)

Please, keep this up!

XOXO

M.

P.S. - I would love a "History In The Making" update! :)