Great chapter!!
Yesh good that Cortes was saved

I'm too lazy to sign in...
Anyway, "It had nearly taken the Captain getting himself killed to make him realize the gravity behind the request"? Was that meant as a little bit sarcastic or not? Well, I'm a sarcastic person too, so probably I would've wrote the same thing, so actually I don't have the right of really speaking. Anyway, Love the end!

Another great chapter! I love the plot of this story. Is that the end?

This is incredible. I was hoping Cortes would live. :D

Great chapter!!
Well maybe Mahad is coming to save Cortes, we will see :D

I hate cliffhangers... but I love this story!
Please update as soon as possible!

I know how Cortes could be saved...

But what's going to really happen next?

This gives a whole new meaning to "cliffhanger."

:'(

I don't know if U already have a plan 4 the next chapter, but maybe MAHAD could appear with the hyperion and um... catch cortes? GREAT STORY CANT WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER! AWESOME!

Well, I certainly had an idea how Cortes could've gotten himself out, but then he'd needed to be a San Da expert. I have an idea how to prevent Cortes from dying but oh, well...
It's your story.
BUT WHY DOES EVERYONE KILL PEOPLE?!
Oh, wait, I myself am killing someone. BUT WHAT'S THE FUN?

Great chapter, please continue soon!

Wow, this is good! And although I know how I'd have the pirates save Cortes, I won't interfere with the thoughts you're having...I've got the feeling that whatever happens in this story, it's going to be good! :)

Great first chapter!
Hope you coninue this

man that is deep. i like it it is awesome!! skyland is my number one fav show.But who is in charge now?

One single word: WHAT?!

Whoa! I knew when I started reading that it was going to be one of those that was too good to stop during reading!

Excellent first chapter!