O_o Run Al...

lol i have the next chapter and i know wots gunna happen!! YAY me! but u do too lol we really have to write more and we have to write more of the other one too! lol

Oh dear, watch out Al and Ruth.

While not my favourite of your stuff, I think that you've adjusted your writing style to match the tone of the story well. Especially with Ed's thoughts, it's easy to see how badly he's been affected by his experiences and I hope that he can recover tho :(

I'll be reading it when you post it next so bring it on!

~DoThePieFace

Aww, poor Ed and Ruth! :(

Very dark, I must say, I'm going to read the next chapter now so I'll say more then! I'm wondering/worried (for poor Ed, Al and Ruth!) where this is going, keep it up.

lol i wonder wot brilliant two people wroted this story...lol poor ruth poor poor ruth...lol

Intresting. Its really unnerving but good. I love insane characters. Please do more :)