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leona-the-critic
2009-08-29 . chapter 1
Aw! I was so gloomy that it would go nowhere...I really love Cissy's character. Such a tragic figure, when you think about it. Her life shaped by old customs. I think (in canon) she always must've resented Andromeda somewhat. Because she had the courage to do what she never did.
The Viceroy of Kush
2009-07-23 . chapter 1
I absolutely love this. Although I adore Severus and Lily more as a romantic couple, the idea of them as best friends and adoptive siblings is warming to me alarmingly quickly.

I think I might actually take a swim in this particular pond, since the waters I've tested with this fic are quite lovely. :)

I never really thought of Narcissa and Severus as a couple, but it rather works. I love it, especially how you've done it, and might look into more fics like it.

If you do continue this into Harry's years, you HAVE to let me know. I love what you come up with, when you sit down and crank somtehing out.

This is definitely a favorite of mine! Thanks for sharing!
born4purple
2009-07-17 . chapter 1
Oh my goodness I loved this story so much! It was bloody fantastic, no other way to describe it. The way everything fit together was wonderful and slipping in clues to his canon identity made the read even better. You are a fabulous writer and I can't wait to read more of your stories!!
Longing for Saisei
2009-07-02 . chapter 1
YAY!

I LOVE THIS STORY!
sylphides
2009-06-28 . chapter 1
LOVE the POTO plot and idea woven into the story, and the idea of Severus being adopted by the Evans- well, lets say his life would have been a whole lot better, I think, if the Evans had done something about their abusive neighbor.
ChaosChild92
2009-05-03 . chapter 1
Oh I loved this!

I was very confused to start off with but you soon proved your genius yet again (as if you needed to).

Fabulous. It would be awesome to see it continued *thinks hard* But just FD and BC are perfect for now. Update them soon. *puppy dog eyes*

Much love
Snood199
2009-05-03 . chapter 1
That was beautiful. I didn't realize "Russ" was Snape until you mentioned a hooked nose, either.
morgrimmoon
2009-04-22 . chapter 1
I guessed it was Snape when you said he had a raven animagus form. >.>

I'm a bit disappointed about Peter coming out like he did. He always seems to get the bad rap in stories. I honestly preferred it in your other fics where he ends up with Ellen. (I think that was her name, I can't remember).
bookwormofmassiveproportions
2009-04-20 . chapter 1
AW! Le Cuteness!
maritinkerbell
2009-04-15 . chapter 1
Aw, this is an ADORABLE story! I love it!
Leah Andrea Black
2009-04-12 . chapter 1
But this is such a great story, I liked it very much!
I thought it was Snape in the beginning and I was right, that was a really great idea :)
It would be nice to read more of this!
Lee
Luzith
2009-04-08 . chapter 1
i loved it. it was so unique and well written. i am not sure if i have ever seen a fic with lily having a twin, but it is a cool idea (especially because you made it plausible with the adoption story). and you seem to have a penchant for making very unlikable characters good.
The Serendipity
2009-04-08 . chapter 1
I am very onterested in this. Not as much as the origanal Dangerverse, but more so than BC. The more different the Lily/James generation is, typically, the more I tend to enjoy it. I especially enjoyed the backwardsness of the Phantom ideas.
Tamira
2009-04-08 . chapter 1
Hi,
I would LOVE to see this continued, but of course you don't have to...
This was so cute! And I kinda loved little Regulus. I just hope he will come around sooner in this world and won't have to die...
Russell, huh? Well, I suppose it was safer for Severus to change first name, too... But why Russell? Because of the colour the hair of his sister has, maybe?
Good, Narcissa could flee... I got the idea of what Russell would do the second I saw how Narcissa reacted on "Lucius" when they danced... It suddendly made sense how he could free her...
Uhm... if any death eater hurts an Evans, Rus and Cissy are "divorced", that's not good...
But why worry? I just assume now, everything will go great int his world... After all why worry about a story that will stay a one-shot, hmm?
A great and cute story it is, btw.
Bye, Tam
Phil Boswell
2009-04-07 . chapter 1
A fun little romp with some fun side-references.

I'm not sure how I feel about Danger being some illegitimate Black semi-cousin, but I'd be interested to see how you thought that one might play out.

I for one would indeed like to see this storyline taken forward into more traditional territory: I can foresee some very interesting wrinkles which you would have to overcome.
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