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Shortchannel4
2009-09-10 . chapter 6
I love this story
Skribbz
2009-07-15 . chapter 4
Haha that was great, really funny.
StolenCat
2009-05-12 . chapter 6
Oh, these are absolutely wonderful! I loved reading every single one of them. :D
Ninja Shen
2009-04-25 . chapter 6
Hot damn, that last chapter was SUPER awkward! It made me sort of sad, I hate when Liz and Patty fight! But it was still so good, I was totally engrossed. I just love your stories, I was browsing fanfics but stopped to read when I saw your name. My boyfriend and I laughed at the idea that Black*Star's ** is the one by which all other asses are judged! XD I totally believe that, too. We'll probably be saying "One to Black*Star" for quite a while. Great stories! I look forward to more! Meanwhile, I leave you with the immortal words of Steven Colbert: "CHARLENE I'M RIGHT BEHIND YOU."
Pippin's Socks
2009-04-06 . chapter 6
And I thought the last one was brilliant xD How do you do it?! Seriously these shots are amazingly witty and yet nice and loving at the same time! xD
Pippin's Socks
2009-04-06 . chapter 5
xD Brilliant xD That's all i can say about this one because that sums it up! Brilliance! xD
Pippin's Socks
2009-04-06 . chapter 4
Wow, I didn't think of that either D: And I thought I had a reputation for sick mindedness xD These are making my revision far more tolerable! xD
Pippin's Socks
2009-04-06 . chapter 3
I am stunned I never thought of it this way xD You put me to SHAME D:
Pippin's Socks
2009-04-06 . chapter 2
xD Ah the things that could go on in that house xD Its all so suspect but you make it brilliant :D
Pippin's Socks
2009-04-06 . chapter 1
Another fantabulous (yes thats a word now) series from Nenena that i can sink my teeth into xD I never get tired of your stories! Your writing in incredible :D
Orchid Falls
2009-04-06 . chapter 6
You really do have a feel for these three characters. I mean I'd never considered sex and Kid, but he would so be that way over it! A wonderful mixture of humour and exploring the relationship/s between the three, as always. Loved the line about Black Star's **, that especially just had me cracking up! I hope you don't finish the claim anytime soon, or at least continue on with the trio.
illegal goddess
2009-04-05 . chapter 5
Oh, I didn't notice there were six of them, not four. :) Still a hit and miss for me. The fifth one was incredibly in character, I must say, all those small details. The sixth one made me extremely angry at Liz, because it is totally unfair to her canon character. She isn't the kindest girl in Death City, true, and she and Patti had an not so lily white past, but she is certainly not a stupid, selfish ** of a girl who'd not only cheat on her partner(s) in a situation where trust is a literal matter of life and death for them, but also would get insulted about being forgiven. Though it goes nicely with the fourth one, like a continuation. ;)
illegal goddess
2009-04-05 . chapter 1
The first one: poor Kid. He really has too much dignity for his own good. XD The next two were pretty funny, and the fourth one was extremely weird. What kind of a person cries out random names during sex and thinks it's nothing to argue about? Even Patti would know better.
Redmage2
2009-04-05 . chapter 6
Oh, wow. She even said Charlene's name in bed, and Kid didn't notice. Wow. Okay. This was a really serious chapter, with Liz being incredibly foolish, but in a way that's entirely believeable. It really works, told from Patty's perspective.

An excellent set of stories, which I very much enjoyed reading. I love how you write these three. They're fantastic, and fun, and sexy.
Redmage2
2009-04-05 . chapter 5
Oh, that last line. So true, I'm sure. :)

The paragraphs which describe Kid's thoughts about each sister are truly wonderful, and they ring very true. Another great chapter!
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