Ahh yes.

That is possibly the funniest HL fanfic I have ever read.

Plus, it had some Alyx/Gordon, which is always GREAT. Keep up the good work dude.

Poor Barney.write some more like this.it can really make someone laugh.

lol that's wicked funny nice story!

This is nice :)
Good job

yay Alyx/Gordon.Awesome story you should make more.

BWAHAHAHA!

Wow, just, wow.

SO Awesome.

Even better given the fact that Gordon would probably need to be able to read Russian or some other Eastern European language to understand the book at all. It's a good little story, and I'd like to see more.

oh come on that was fantastic please do another chapter or better yet make it a multi-chapter fic. thiers hardly any Half Life fics in the same catagories as this one any I love anything thats Gordon/Alyx so please consider making it multi-chapter.

Dear goddesses, that was brilliant!

this　was absolutely great! thank you for a very wonderful (albeit short) read :-)