LMAO! I love McGonagall!

Heyho!

Oh Geez, that was good! :'D I was laughing, poor Jimmy! But now he knows, he should not mess with the Weasley twins!
The part with the underpants was just hilarious! I really had to laugh hard at this!
First the farting warts, then the song in his ear, but then the unerware thing... honestly, that is so weasleyish! Something they really could have invented during their time at Hogwarts.
And poor Jimmy tried to be prepared... Well, he failed. He was supposed to fail. ;D

Lisa

Wow, that was gorgeous! It's really dangerous to breathe the same air like Fred and George, it is. I think my absolute fav was McGonagall's altitude... She can be SO understanding at times...

Wow that was hilarious! And the pranks were great!

*DIES laughing*

Okay. This was absolutely hysterical. First of all, that mental jargon Jimmy muttered to himself while trying to force himself to get up was priceless. I've been there. That is SO accurate.

The first prank seemed so... Well, I doubt any girls would have thought of a spell like that!

The second joke was my FAVORITE. Without spells, I have experienced this. I once worked across from a Veggie Tales kiosk that replayed the same inane songs every twenty minutes. There is nothing, nothing worse than getting dumb songs like those trapped in your brain. My siblings and I came up with a thousand creative ways to destroy that sound system, but unfortunately, none of us can really use the Force.

The third joke... and Jimmy's reaction to it... Well, it cracked me up. I wish Mireet knew; Jimmy deserves to be knocked around a bit for that! The moment in the Great Hall, where Jimmy blurted that bizarre question out and shocked the whole school... that was TOO funny!

I loved how Jimmy kept putting up new defenses that were thwarted by the new jokes. Right before the third one, when Jimmy went through a litany of protection spells, I wondered if he should have put something over his eyes - then realized he had a shield and thought he was covered. HA! Not quite.

Such wild fun. Write on!
Jazzcat

Man, that was hilarious! I think I laughed harder with each one, all those pranks were brilliant. And McGonagall's line at the end was priceless.

If the expression "laughed my ass off" was literal, I'd be skinnier than Twiggy (gave my age away with that one, huh?)! You truly have a sick mind--I guess that's why I like your writing. I've been called twisted myself, on a number of occasions. Great one-shot!

Have a fantastic week.

HIlarious x]
I loved it

Wonderful story! The "bra-and-panty" charm had me howling. As did Jimmy trying desperately to see Mireet in her bra and panties. I adore O'Bannon; he's such a normal teenager, and every single story featuring him at Hogwarts, you do a great job with his Americanisms, keeping him unique from the other characters in the Potter universe, but also believably developing him as friends with canon characters.

Loved Fred and George in this too (by the way, you write them so well). Perfectly in character. And each one of the pranks were so well thought out and hysterically delivered. LOVED the farting warts. And yes, "Unskinny Bop" is a particularly insidious earworm. And Poison? Yes, horribly perfect hair band for your purposes here.

McGonagall's line at the end ROCKED! Great work!

And Happy Opening Day to you too! Hope your Phillies do well tonight. I can only hope that whatever ungodly amounts of money the Evil Empire poured into their little toy won't buy them a playoff run ;-D I'll be watching my boys tomorrow. Hopefully, this'll be their year.

lol that was amazing! it would have been cool if you'd put a little more french like talking from those girls but it was really good! ROFL the whole time especially at the end. good writing, you should do more like short stories and stuff. I'd jusk be careful when you proof read it to make sure of what you are saying:)