I really love your story. Will we get to see Orihime's bankai?

This is very original and you certainly left us all at a cliff-hanger. The ending of the chapter was quite unexpected.

Good job and keep writing!

You messed up on bleach, making ichigo look weak sucks having inoue always save him sucks and the fact that you wnt let ichigo get stronger by killing any hollows is the worst

awesome story! Now ur making me dream about whts gonna happen next!

I admire your dedication to this story, two years and still writing strong, keep up the good work.

fun to read

This is great though I have to say Ichigo's hollow should be stronger than Emihiro if not a bit slightly. The hollow knows his strength very well whereas Emihiro shows a great deal of arrogance, perhaps a bit more than the Hollow. I hope to see where this goes.

I have always postponed reading this fic because I thought you had abandoned it. And then I saw you updated and, damn, I needed to read.

You know, I hope you update more often. I liked this fic very much and, having just finished chapter 13, I hope Ichigo and Orihime are not siblings. All of this stuff about Emi thinking about Masaki being alike someone is very, hum, ominous (?), at least now that I'm going to read chapter 14.

I like Ichigo and Hime making out, and Emi being part of Hime and having perverted thoughts is just promising...

Really, update more often. You write very, very well.

Congrats.

I think I nearly cried when I saw the new chapter xD It's been too long...

However, this chapter is worth the wait!

Add to it a new development with Emi...and I can wait the next update!

So please, make it soon rather late Y_Y

Loved it! Wonderful writibg can't wait for next update. Fon't take so long ok. Latr

Not gonna bother to see if someone else mentioned this to you in reviews, so I might be repeating something you already know.

Ryuu/ryou as a word for dragon has many homophones- that is, other words spelled with different kanji yet are pronounced the same. An example is how it refers to a school, particularly in the context of a school of martial arts. You'll see Random-Martial-Arts-School-Name-ryuu to denote it as one, like Musabetsu Kakuto Ryuu identifies the school for indiscriminate grappling in Ranma 1/2.

Tatsu, however, means Dragon, and only Dragon. It's like how in english, we have words like Dragon, and Leviathan, and Wyrm, that all denote dragons. But Leviathan can also be a giant sea creature, and a Wyrm could be confused for a worm if only heard, and not read. Tatsu, however, is like Dragon in the sense that it only refers to Dragons, and can't really be confused with anything else.

Im T_T in happyness, is was begining to think i wouldnt read more of this awesome fic.. really, it was too long in my opinion.

And that final part was totally unspected. In seems that Emi dediced to stop playing with her "food".. both of them.

I cant wait another month to readya, but i really wish you good luck in your studies

To be honest, I was hoping this transition would've ended this chapter with a final battle between Orihime and Emihiro, though it doesn't seem to be; While I appreciate the depth you put into the whole discovery and 'soul-searching' Orihime has done to find her resolve and the reason to fight, it leaves the feeling of lack of progression and the possibility that you'll end up writing a chapter much like how the canon went, where it is just down to the last second before a successful victory, which with the frequency of their use, becomes less and less climatic. Still it was a well written chapter with the great use of emotions though, so well done on that regard and hope to see more when you can get them out when you find the time.

Please update soon.

I hope you plan on continuing this eventually. You have a great and unique story here.