Love the flashback

Love this Chapter

I love how you made Ichigo protective of Inoue

WTF happened?!!

You have reveal who is this master soon!!

Update ASAP

Keep it up! I love it so far! New Chapter PLZ!

Hm I only really half get any Naru/Temari pairing personally i don't really care for Naru/Saku it just seems he would end up 6 ft under at some point in the relationship Love Naru/Hina and you would be better off Having Hinata with Itachi or having Naruto posesses the Sharingan or something lol (this is my opion which is extremely biased in the fact i am hardcore Naru/Hina without it i lose interest very quickly most of the time :P)

Anyways have you ever considered Ichi/Hime/Nel thressome lol its my personal fav though there aren't very many out at the moment lol but ya Rukia like Sakura is a pretty cool and fun character just not a good pairing for the main character so Orihime still gets her extra powers eh well can't say i didn't see it coming either way keep it up.

I'm really curious about Orihime's story. I wonder if Kurosaki Isshin knows her father. If memory serves, Isshin was a captain level shinigami too. Orihime has a younger sibling. Interesting. An OC or an existing character in the story?

There are 3 dragons as far as I know. Dragon by itself is 'doragon' like how 'doragon beru' means 'dragon balls' (manga). Dragon relating to something is 'ryuu' like how 'ryuuken' could mean 'fist of the dragon'/'dragon fist'. Finally 'tatsu' is the dragon on the zodiac. I didn't send this with my last review because I didn't see the dragon part of your foot note.

What I don't understand is Orihime's sudden Shun Shun Rikka, unless it's her zanpakutou's shikai manifesting itself from Orihime's body. You know, I was half expecting Tatsuki to obtain powers instead of Orihime. It would be interesting for Tatsuki though, but suppose for a minute Tatsuki were to gain dragon like armor on her body (lower legs, fore arms, torso/shoulders, helmet) called "Armor of the Dragongod", not that would be interesting. I hope to see the rest of it later.

By the way, resolve isn't something you borrow, it's something you have altogether from your desires. Orihime and Ichigo's desires to protect are the same so neither of 'em are borrowing resolve, Orihime's resolve has always been her's no one else's. (I wish the canon Orihime understood that)

I like it so far. XD Keep up the good work!

Shun Shun Rika, along with Amaterasu?! awsom combination!

I hope Ishida in this story feels even more Shittier than in the Manga/Anime

Ichigo, better be taking out those hollows.

Get going Urahara-sama!!

Update ASAP, JamJackEvo-dono

about the pairing thing, I wonder wat would happen if Itachi was still alive and there SasuHina, would he get along with Neji, i dont know! :D

Cool, you referenced my OC bloodline trait, the Byakuringan. If you rewrite this chapter just referenced my name GameDemonKing since I have those rights anyway.

So, what, Orihime is both a shinigami and has her rejection abilities as well? That doesn't make too much sense to me. While her developing the powers to begin with is one thing, I really feel that spiritual power like theirs would fall into "path of least resistance" type of things. The normal shinigami don't have powers liker her's or Chad's because they are learning shinigami arts, so all build up of reiatsu would be channeled into that. The reason that he humans have this different power was that they didn't have that outlet and so the powers built up until they were able to burst free in different and unexpected ways... Otherwise, why would someone as powerful and ambitious as Azien neglect training his powers or whatever so that he could channel them likewise?

Yeah!
i cant wait for the next one!!

wow great story so far, interesting idea too.
i just found it and read it thru please keep it up.
ichihime is also my second fav anime/manga pairing being (the first being NaruHina)

i know i'm gonna be rambling now but i noticed alot of similaritys of the two pairings one the one hand the hero of the story with a mystirous past a dark entity inside who drew the attention and love on one of the kindest, shyest and most kindhearted people in exsistance

hope it all works out for them all in canon