Good story. Keep it up!

Good plot. I like the werewolf twist part, and it was pretty darn true to the show. Now, you had quite a few spelling errors and the writing style lacked a certain...maturity, but if you wrote it when you were thirteen, that's understandable. It's just that you used so much description. I didn't need to know that Hope's hair curled at the end at what sort of clothes she was wearing. All in all, a good story. Thanks, and keep 'em coming. :)

jenben