Oh my God, you had my heart beating so fast... I'm still trying to catch my breath...

Extraordinary work!

"I only need you, Olivia," she pleaded, "Please stay."

- that was nice to read. Thanks for writing it,, please write more!

*sigh* Beautiful

I just found this and am totally in love with it

This is beautifully written and I hope I'll get to read more from you. Otalia are the best pairing I've ever seen on TV or film, gay or straight. True love at its best.

I can't wait for more...I live in Australia and have been watching the clips on you tube. I'm dying for this to happen on the show...and I think this fic may be able to tide me over...even if only for a little bit.

Thanks for writing and putting it up...

That was great I am going to miss them when they go off the air

awesome. thanks so much!

Beautiful description of their first kisses... I'm really looking forward to the rest!

What a terrific start! Like so many Otalia fans, I'm anxious about how the story line will be affected by the cancellation. I know our ladies are in terrific hands with you...I've loved your earlier stories and am really looking forward to seeing where you take us with this!

yay otalia can't wait to read the rest good start