Creatively and vividly done!

But, as an old-car fanatic, I have to say: never was such a thing as a "low-slung" Packard. They all rode high, haughty and proud.

I'd end it like this:

Potter couldn't believe it so went to George's house. He wheeled up to George and grabbed him by the shirt, causing the $8000 to fall out of his wheelchair which everyone saw. Uncle Billy said, "so THAT's where it went!"

Bert came and arrested Potter for theft, but just then Potter dropped dead.

The End.

I loved this, I love this movie I can't tell you how happy I was to find a story on it. i'm so glad you gave Potter what he deserved yes I enjoyed this very much

This is a great story. I can't understand how anyone would want to bash this. I was thinking about writing an IAWL fic after I rented the movie. I think I might write one, being inspired by the movie and your fic. God bless and Merry Christmas to you.

omg this is sooooooooooo great you got all da characters rite and writing is terrific

I love your sequel! I agree that Mr. Potter should have been punished somehow. I liked your take on how that punishment happened.