A really,really great story you have here.
Beautifully written, and detailed too. Well, while that's my general review, i will review each chapter individually

1: Lyon!*sob* I remember replay it as soon after the ending and all day curse. Damn. I make my way to the perfect ending for the second time play.
OMG, you expressed Frey's feeling perfectly. I think i gonna cry... Then here it's, a so sad poem, but touching and good nonetheless. Poetic, yet portrayed her so well. You're talented in poem, eh? i envy you. I never can write even a single line poem smoothly, without exhausting my brain cells.

2:It's okay for improvisation. I like her. Any idea to make them a couple? Hehee. Josephine is Josephine, i guess. Though i put a suspicion in both Shula and Kayla due to their way to talk. Waiting for the plot twist. Aww. Poor Frey.

3:At least now i know this is set about one to two years prior to original story. Humour show their face here. I'm glad you add them. That three girls,so cute! Although according to the ingame informations, by this timeline Miakis is 24, Luserina is umm... 18? and Lym is 12,right?
they're getting along that well. Gosh, you scare me with the whole Craig indictnation part! I thought Frey is starting to get all silly due to his depression, then you get me laughing hard at the last part.
Craig will have a very hard ten years indeed. I love Toma XD New generations, i feel so old... Go on Georg, drag him with you!

If you don't mind, can you updating more frequently?Twice a month,maybe?

Best regards,

What an absolute joy to read. It has been far, FAR too long since I've had the pleasure of reading a story as amazingly written as this. Truth to be told I had given up all hopes that writers such as yourself still contributed to this website, and I am no less than positively delighted that I was struck with the inspiration to browse for a good story this evening. It might be a bit much to go this far, but thank you for writing this and restoring my faith in fanfiction. I'll eagerly look forward to your future chapters, both for the plot as well as the writing itself.

Excellent. I thought this story was a one-shot, but I was wrong. This is a very unique story you're writing. Please continue writing this story.

Beautiful. I almost cried at the end;_; Please write more stories like this.