What can I say? This story was amazing! I know that I haven't written many reviews but I love your series. I can't get enough of it. I keep checking, hoping you've loaded another one.

Avon and Cally. I've always loved them and you've brought them back to life again. But not only that, you've gone much further with their characters than the series did. I finally get to see the relationship I always knew they had but we were only given hints of in the series.

Avon. I first started reading your stories because of Avon. You show the sides of him other people never to want to write about. They have more fun with the snarky, nasty Avon. But he was much more than that. I loved the nicer Avon too, when he wasn't feeling attacked or defensive. He's a wonderfully complex character. I love that he's a geek and the happiest moments he has is when he's playing around with the ship's tech and the sopron. IMO, yours is closer to the real Avon of the series than most fics I've read, much more multi-dimensional and deeper. Just like Avon.

Vila. I must admit that I never liked Vila much before but because of your stories, I've started liking him. I love the humour you bring out with him. And I like that you try to write about the class differences between him and Avon.

Servalan. You've made her deliciously evil and twisted.

Reya, Argus, Sester...I love all of your OCs too. You've created some very interesting and complex characters. They're great fun and add to your version of the B7 universe. Sometimes I wish I could see what it would be like if they had been in the series. IMO, they're much better than the poor replacements we got.

You're plots are amazing. I love the way you introduce ideas in one story and build on them gradually. Like clues to a mystery.

Your stories have it all, action, drama, laughther, mystery, romance, etc. The only thing you haven't tried is a musical (I'm kidding).

Wow, this was long but it makes up for all the reviews I haven't written.

Thanks for all the stories and please keep writing!

I finally finished what you have of this story last Sunday morning at 5 am.
Oh..My..God! There are really now words to acurately describe this story...but I'm going to give it a shot anyway. I love this story. Love,love,love. The way you protrayed a man who is by all accounts clinical and "emotionless" by stipping everything he is down to the bare and rebuilding him, then adding on these new emotions that he has no idea how to deal with. You didn't make him like everyone else. He suffers, his mind cannot handle and he clings to the small breath of sanity that he can find by way of Cally and Vila. I have always believe that after Blake left those two were what kep Avon grounded to the life he was living. When Cally died, it unbalanced him and he through all of the weight that two people were carrying onto one person who couldn't handle it, thus the slow decent you see in Season four. Which is beautifully described in this series.
I do hope you are continuing to write this as I would love to see that these four men do when they finally come face to face with the President and her people one last time.