Wow...

I love this! Very effective =] especially Rodney's rambling, and his mini internal monologue about the after life.

Unicorns and candy mountains? It can't be a coincidence - u a Charlie the unicron fan??

Loved this, very good stuff.

Wow, this is the last of your sga tics I haven't read - and ironically, it was the first one you wrote, and I still love it!

I'm gonna go ahead and put you on author alert (my first ever one!) even though I don't read your csiny fics, so I can stalk any more sga fics you post =]

thanx for ALL of you fics,
your stalker,
Kai x

Brilliant! I loved Rodney's POV, and John at then end was perfect - especially his revenge in that last line! Priceless!!

Ooh, I like this!! Brave!Rodney is my favorite, and you've done a really good job with him here. Thanks for sharing!

Another good one! And this was your first SGA story?

I really like this bit:
“McKay, no one’s expecting you to sacrifice yourself. You shouldn’t have to do that sort of thing.”
Of course not. And Pegasus was, as the name suggested, full of magical winged horses. And unicorns. And candy mountains.

It may not be a great plan, but obviously it's a plan that worked--so a good-enough plan. John should give him more credit. (And he'd better not really have told Zelenka where the coffee is!)

Even dying, Rodney's still thinking things that would drive his sister up the wall: sneaking Madison out for a non-vegetarian meal? I don't blame Rodney for her kidnapping; I blame whoever it was at the SGC who should have made sure their connection was secure!

Cool story! I think you have a great grasp of Rodney's voice

I really liked this. Very tense!

You have McKay's character down pat. I liked how we can see his thought processes grinding down as the CO starts affecting him. Excellent work!

Wow!! Great story! Very well written and just a thrill to read! Well done!! You had Rodney's and John's voices spot on! Your first SGA story you say...well I hope it isn't your last!! Hope to see another one from you soon! Thanks for sharing your story with us.

Hmm, not too much more stories for here I hope... Sorry, sorry - expect this to be full of not-so-gentle pokes for certain other fandoms, but I'll try and remain objective and professional :D So, I have very little idea who these people are, but at some point I'm sure I will. Wow, 3 reviews in a row! update madness! May it ocntinue though *coughforNYcough* Sorry, did say I had a cold ;) hope you liked my last 2 rambles! But yes, as always really good, love your descriptions, and humour too! Great last line, as I do appreciate how important coffee is. And I had to laugh at a character once more coming very close to death XD Love the title as well. I like the characters from how you write them, and it wasn't a chore to review. Sorry it isn't much of a one, and a bit silly, but hopefully you will laugh anyway... and feel inspired to continue with updates *coughforNYpreferablycough* Dear me, sorry, best go and find some cough mixture! Lily x

Wow and wow! That was amazingly good! I love Rodney as the self-sacrificing hero. Thank you :)

Just read your story :) Very nice! I look forward to any new works you feel like doing

Well done! Loved Rodney's thoughts as he tried to save them all once again.

I loved this. Rodney sacrificing himself and thinking of his sister just to end up having his last thought being about a puzzle fit perfectly. Of course John teasing him about the coffee was great. Can't wait to read more from you. Thanks.