I probably would have made it much longer between when they met and when they hooked up. Luke and Mara are strong willed and even the force couldn't make them kiss when they were that opposed to one another.

Poor Leia, has no idea about what to do. Her fear could be her downfall and the trepidation about fully training just might make her even more vulnerable. And Vader is stuck in the middle trying to be all things to everyone when he himself isn't sure about his place anymore. Why do I foresee disaster?

great story

O.O! Oh no! Explosion! Vader and Leia are going to come runnign because of the explosion the caused... OH boy this is going to complicate things immeasurable I think. Please update soon! this is awesome!

0.0 Well... write more.. oh dear... there aregiong to be seruois repurcutions...

good chapter

Luke...Mara..a kiss...supernova...

I wonder - how does Vader or Leia reacts on it...

meanwhile across the universe whatever jedi remaining alive get a sudden nosebleed thru the force
the emperor starts to shout an smoke can be seen bellowing from his robes as if he was on fire
an vader, beneath his mechanical helmet that hid his face from all..smiled

just a random thought i had when i got to the end, thought it was amusing an kinda fit this chapter..kay maybe the jedi getting nosebleed is a bit much but its FUNNY!!
xD

I lveo it! Thoug, you will have to update faster or eles I will get disinterested in the story... It's really, really, good so far, but I need more chapters!

Nice. I can so see Vader going to the room, investigating the "Force Surge" and finding both Luke and Mara... in bed... naked. Wouldn't THAT be funny?

Oh, Please! SOON!

Man... if a kiss is a supernova... what happens when two jedi actually consumate their love? It's pretty hard to top that description.

On the note of Han, can we see Jabaa trying to get his prize back and Vader fileting him?

"Can you fel the love tonight..." could't help myself. There isn't much to say seen's I don't see any problems in this chapter. I see why Leia is afriad of the froce. Can't really blame her for it.

I wish you would have put an Omake saying what could have been happening as Luke and Jade kiss that the ship started rocking, the love boat theme(not sure if that's how is call) came on(or the other song(again, not sure what is call)on top.), strom tropers when there distans when it came on... in short have some caos going on man!

Also, to get this out of my system, when are you gounig to update Sparda Nightwing, Rumors of a Shadow Fox, Tradition and Honor: a Devil's Creed, Naruto: The Descendent of Revan, and while I'm at it Establisng Dominace.

very good chapter. I really am a fan of LukeXmara and it is nice to see there start. I love this story as a whole what might have been has proven to be an incredible thing.

Awesome chapter keep up the good work and update soon!

Nice, very nice. Please update soon.