Loved the story!

Loved that they were 'fated' for each other. Wonderful fic.

I had to comment mid fic. Oh my god!

Amazing, probably my fav of all your stories todate. I especially love Skip being in it, lol, that way way funny.

Good story, very exciting. You did a great job of writing this, and I sincerely hope that some other people will come and review for you!

Her-My-Oh-Knee

Sam

No...Wash died again!

I had hoped that he would stay alive for a while longer. Like, for the rest of the story.

Good chapter...one more to go!

H-M-O-K

Sam

"Wash...go play with your dinosaurs."

Awesomeness. Amusing chapter, I'm very much enjoying it. I was a little worried in the beginning, because Mal seemed a bit...Jayne-like, but it's all him now. Good job!

H-M-O-K

Sam

Hi! This is a very intriguing story! I'm surprised that you don't have any reviews yet.

I would suggest, however, that you perhaps edit the summery, and maybe even the title. The summery was confusing, which is probably why many people haven't checked it out. And the title doesn't seem to make sense. I know I'm only in the first chapter, but it just seems like it's an extension of the summery, or something. I'm not sure.

Anywho, good job! I'm off to the second chapter!

Her-My-Oh-Knee

Sam