I loved this story! This is one of my favorite stories on here.

dang that was great!! made me tear up at the end. it WAS a bit darker than illuminations (haha go figure) but hey, some people like it that way. like me. sometimes. anyway, greay job!

Wow. That was stunningly beautiful.

Wow! That was so touching! Aw..Poor James and Paton

Now that was AMAZING. Please continue. Loved it.

good job! I think it offers us a lot of insight into Paton's present character. really emotional too, very sad.

Amazing just amazing! I love it!
Keep up the writing, I'm begging you! xD

Oh my gosh, I LOVED IT! See, I'm on my Spring Break right now, but even though Paton was angstier, I think it fit his personality perfectly, especially at the age you portrayed him in. I always thought that Jenny Nimmo should write about Paton's childhood. a) Paton is totally awesome b) it would make sense to write one and c) it would be interesing to get things from his point of view. Again, I absolutley love it, God, it's amazing. I can't get enough of Paton.