I really liked the play on words and the story line, but I think you could have made them not super. I mean you said it was YJ as normal teenagers. And Cassie and Cissie got me mixed up, I couldn't tell who was who I knew one of the C's was Artemis but I didn;t get the other. Trust me it could be better

This is a very good story. It almost sweet in some ways, especially the end. I'm not a big fan of Tim Drake or the other version of Young Justice though. But the story made up for it. It truly was a very good story.

that was great i loved it ]

That last line was AWESOME. "I mean we're young but we're just us..." classic! I really liked this.

My god, that was perfect.

I'm in fantastic love with this story! Totally in love! The AU rocks, it's pretty realistic without taking itself too seriously, the little bits of cannon that make YJ what it is . . . I love it. Fantastic.

That was SO cool, you can't just end it there! Come on, do it for a fan, carry it on! Theres like millions of questions that leaves!

Like did it happen again?

Did bart find out?

Do rob and sb become friends?

Do they actually start a gang!

COME ON! PLEASE!

_ DD!

woot! very fun fic, nice to see everyone with out powers

Yeah i dug that story. And it has a clever title if nothing else

Oh my goodness! That was really awesome! I wish i could write as well x.x this was waaaay too cute _ i hope to read more stuff soon!

Ha, very cool. tHat was done very well.

That was good but it needed more impulse! u should do a sequel... with more impulse! Cya

You HAVE to write more! That was a great take on YJ, and I hope to see a sequal or something! It's like a great movie just came out and now we all are waiting for the sequal to follow it! Heh, I know this is a late reveiw, this story might be older than I think but... I would love to see a follow up with it, and so would a lot of others obviously! Keep writing Arlene!

that was just amazing.

a great elseworlds take. very believable.

thanks for the great read.

Ha. cute.