|Reviews for Through the Gate|
| Latias876 11/21/12 . chapter 2
I hope that you're ready to post this by now, though! Good luck!:)
| annea101 2/19/12 . chapter 1
i absolutlty cant wait for more
| Bakaberry 10/17/11 . chapter 2
i want more :c
| diff-r-ent-1 8/19/10 . chapter 2
well i love fmaXhp x-overs and the first chapter was fun to read so i hope you'll be able to update soon! if you need help or something, just let me know! good luck
| Vi-Violence 8/2/10 . chapter 2
I hope you get the rest of the story back up soon.
| Deekie 3/24/10 . chapter 1
i like the improvements and am waiting somewhat patiently for the next chapter .
| Mird 3/23/10 . chapter 6
Editing? Good idea. While I still like this fic, some of the dialogue was a bit... iffy. And it certainly wouldn't hurt to read through the chapters and check for unrealistic timing, for example, when Ed was in Knock-whatever alley. Also, I noticed that Ed was slowly slipping out of character over the course of the story as it began getting more description-based rather than thought-based or dialogue-based.
A betareaders would help, too. It really is the best way to improve.
Lol, sorry. Slipping into critique mode. I'll stop now. :)
| Mird 3/23/10 . chapter 1
Hmm... Oddly enough, I enjoyed this!
I've been writing a parody fic titled "Epic" in which I mock all of the cliches of FMA fanfiction. The next chapter is going to be the beginning of an FMA/HP crossover parody, so I've been reading crossover fics for a few weeks and, quite frankly, they all suck. I saw yours on the front page and hoped for more of the same (I've been a bit stuck on how to begin the chapter, so I clicked it looking for cliches), but I got the opposite. This fic certainly isn't orgiinal (don't take offense at this- it's a Harry Potter crossover, ma'am. Like I said, I've been reading these for a while, and, trust me, there is NOTHING original that can be done with an HP crossover.), but it's extremely well-written, and that's original in itself. Enough for me to keep reading, anyways.
*cough* Sorry. I will shut up and continue reading, now. *salutes*
| goldacharmed 3/23/10 . chapter 5
I really enjoyed this story. I cant wait for more.
| BrokenBloodDrops 1/11/10 . chapter 5
Nice. It's hard to find good crossovers, sometimes...
| Anonymous 12/22/09 . chapter 5
This is a great story! Yep, Star Wars moment! XD Feel the force, Ed!
Well, anyways, I really like what you did with this story and I can't wait to read the chapters yet to come! The research you did for Ed's wand was really impressive, and I think it suits him perfectly! C
Well, anyways, as I said, can't wait to read the later chapters!
Anonymous, signing out!
| Anonymous 12/21/09 . chapter 3
When you said that Dumbledore would put Ed in a wizarding household, I knew it would be the Weasely's, but I was thinking, as a joke, that it would be an exchange program, where Ed goes to stay at the Burrow, and Ron gets shipped off to Germany, without his consent of course.
Well, I guess your way is good too, for a SERIOUS part in the story.
| the-ice-cold-alchemist 8/24/09 . chapter 3
this is a really really good story update asap! k?
| Anonymous 7/24/09 . chapter 5
Great story! One of the best fanfics I've ever read! Please put the newest chapter up as soon as you
can! Can't wait 'till you put it up! XD
| The Storytelling Maunderer 7/18/09 . chapter 5
Oh, gosh, how is Ed gonna handle a flying car... Keep the story going, it rocks!