i thought it was great!
plz rite more ur grt,i bet that someday u'll get a book published id be 1st in line

I love this story :) It was so short... :( But I'm gonna go read the other one now :)

Constance

Marrying Alice! :)

Does she know that this isn't their first wedding?

That was sweet. Dang it. How am I supposed to give feedback if I can't find something wrong!?

Aw! I love the last line. It's so sweet. :)

I like your writing voice :)

I think it's good, but how he got his mother's ring is confusing to me. He died because of a bear, and I doubt he would just be carrying the ring around with him.
Still, good story.

I like it.

lol please update soon so cute

This is truly adorable and I can't wait for the next chapter

Aww, just lovely. :)

A wonderful new chapter!! The writing, while short, was extremely sweet. I love this line, my absolutely favorite, "He wondered if he would ever feel less of a monster by marrying Alice, someday."

Thanks for sharing!! :D

aw this is so sweet! :)

lol cute write more