i really like how u wrote out this alternate ending! It came out really good and I only wish they were that lovey dovey at the end. =( why'd she have to go get her friends and leave him alone in the little swirly thing? she's supposed to love him more!lol. well anyway it was REALLY great and I really liked it. nice job!

Awesome! T_T

Ari chan

Great Job. I love it. I haven't seen the episodes because I can't seem to find them. *sigh* Anyway, your a great writer. I'm starting my own Munto X Yumemi story but I'm not sure if i should post it. I'm not that great a writer. ^_^ Can't wait to read more of your stories.

this was wonderfully dramatic and I squeed at the almost-kiss scene. lovely writing as always!

so sweet. i just watched all of the munto episodes, and i really like the anime, though i wished it lasted longer. your fics really are good, lots of descriptions and you really seem to understand the anime. good work on this one!

Normal Mixed: ... I'm blown away. You basically covered everything that I wanted to happen in the ending... and so well! Your stories connect so well with the canon plot, even the fluff or slightly fluffy moments seen to fit well. Or perhaps that's because you fit it with the story. Either way, another great installment. Don't feel at all worried because you took away time from Vows for this. It was well worth it. And, for once, Ichiko did something I liked. I'm surprised she did nothing against Gntarl in the anime... I'll be she's faster than he is. I mean,(He's huge!) yeah... But that's a conversation for another time.

Fangurl Mixed: ZOMG ambiguously nekkid glowie-scene! WIN!

By the way, your disclaimers are quite funny. They keep getting a chuckle from me.

aw that is so cute :D
loved this!!
a really sweet story XD