 MoonliteWriter 2009-08-19 . chapter 2A-M-A-Z-I-N-G as usual!
Believe it or not, I used to love Sailor Moon--
But I stopped when I realized kids of my gender didn't really like it :/
But this story suddenly struck a note inside of me, which is peaking to go and look back at the Sailor Moon series...
Magical, I tell ya!
And I do like the little tidbits you put in to incoporate Sailor Moon + W.I.T.C.H
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 MoonliteWriter 2009-08-19 . chapter 1I like the prologue a lot right now :)
And ooh, I do like how you incorporate names! I have T O N S of original characters that I look up names to match how they are.
Sorry to digress!!
Gonna keep on reading!
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 DayDreamer9 2009-05-31 . chapter 4SUPER COOL! XD "dances" I love the way you blended the two versions together so well ^^ I hope that Taranee and Alchemy get on good terms together soon, but I wonder if Deite will still be around next chappie. Can't wait for Will to turn up! Wanna get a gPhone myself ^_^ This is super cool, I love ya for making this :) |
 KayCelestine 2009-05-31 . chapter 2omg...i think my eyes died...
anyway, this chapter was amazing. It was detailed and very thorough. I loved it.
I'm surprised I finished it this fast though, as much as I love long chappies, i think i killed my eyes reading this one...too long.
but w/e...all that matters is that i read it and that it (like everything else you write) was perfect. |
 KayCelestine 2009-05-31 . chapter 1great chapter. This amazing, your usual brilliance. ^_^ It was flawless, to say the least. Anyway...on to chapter 2.
p.s It took my 2 years, but I FINALLY updated "Hide & Seek" |
 Greki 2009-05-31 . chapter 4Another great chapter. I was actually wondering why Taranee and Alchemy had those sort of feelings toward each other. I'm still not exactly sure I understand why, but it's a nice add to the mix.
Anyway, I wonder if Will is going to have the same role as in "The Royal Guardian"? |
 XV-Dragon 2009-05-31 . chapter 4Another awsome chapter Sokai, can't wait to see the next one, since my fav is making her appearince. |
 yellow 14 2009-05-31 . chapter 4A very interesting fic. 47 pages for a chapter!?! The longest single chapter I've ever written is a grand total of six. Try breaking up your AN, they're a little clunky. Keep updating |
 Sniper Fodder 2009-05-11 . chapter 3Haha, You are fighting everything in perfectly I must say. As soon as I read the first paragraph of Act II Light bulbs were going off on how well you are making these two universes fit together. Can't wait for the next chapter! |
 Sniper Fodder 2009-05-07 . chapter 2Hahahahaha, that was probably the longest ever Author's Note I had ever seen at the end of a story XD. Have to give you props for the ammount of time and effort you seem to be putting into this story. If you were willing to write that big of a note about the story, then yea, You definatly are gearing up for this one XD.
You really loved transforming Elyon didn't you? Lol. I kept having flash backs to the original Sailor Moon series as I was reading it. Bravo, FTW. Did an excellent job there. It reminded me of something else and I was constantly giggling for a good 20 min thinking about Sailormoon and some other memories. I'm so ready for your next transformation and to see who it will be :)
I'm really excited to see what you do next. The way you are pulling this one off is great. And this is such a great 'XV-Dragon X-over Style" fanfic that I'm loving it. I did try to rent all of the sailormoon off of netflix so I could compare notes for what you are doing, but unfortantly ALL of the DvD's aren't even bought by Netflix yet, or There are none XD. Either way that kind of sucked.
Man, I have such the urge right now to go hunting down Sailormoon episodes. Alas I'll leave it alone for now. GJ. Now only if I could read your stories offline lol. Oh, and if you think I'm making fun of you or anything like that in any of my review, I'm not. I was having a semi-okay day and then your story came along and cheered me right up. To me, it has the best of Sailormoon filled with characters that I know of. Keep up the Good work Sokai. Did a great job of capturing and showing what you wanted to. |
 Greki 2009-05-04 . chapter 3Hmm, forgot to open the window review before reading... I think I got right down to the third scene or something before starting to write. Oh well.
Anyway, the Grumper sisters don't sound so bad in this one, but who knows. And poor Taranee, what with such reputation.
Ohh! I didn't know drool too could be called saliva in English.
Anyway, good lord, I don't think I've ever seen someone so stuck-up ever. Anyway, I was actually wondering how you'd introduce them as T left quite suddenly. Nice idea.
I can now safely say I don't see her as a ballet dancer...
Nigel? Wow... just, wow. I never would have thought that was him... if not for the descriptions... but yeah, that was weird.
On another note, I KNEW IT WAS HIM, HELL YEAH! Well, both of them, if you know what I mean. Surprising, though.
While I was watching the fight scene it was like going back in time and watching Usagi shout out all of her theatrics, and well, it was fun. xD
...I actually thought you'd be naming her Sailorfire or something... Hmm, I like her lenghtened (sorry for the spelling) title, better, though.
You know... you're right. I'm already getting used to Sailormeridian already.
Anyway, it was also a great chapter this one. I have now found myself hooked with it too.
Oh, btw, yep, I liked your song, even though it was brief, but then again that wasn't the focus, was it? xD |
 Greki 2009-05-04 . chapter 2I think I'll go by scene. Might facilite our respective reading/writing.
First: I'd love to wake up at 7:25, lol... but oh, she was late. Anyway, I had completely forgotten about that cat! I actually cringed when she fell, lol.
Second: Thankfully I never had academically strict parents, but they still indulged to us the importance of knowledge and reasoning. Actually, their way of pressuring made me eager to study stuff many times... too bad I always got distracted with video games. xD
And god-darn-it... I want that turkey sandwich... Aww I like Martin. He's really a nice guy, if a bit... too honest sometimes, but nothing that he doesn't make up for. But oh well, I kinda understand Elyon on that aspect.
Hmm, and very true, very true. He is gullible. xD
Third: Ohh, but nicknames are cute (slightly strange, but cute)! Lol, Greki-poo. I'll never forget that one. xD
Fourth: Hmm, I'm almost sure I know that jerk from somewhere...
Fifth: Gah! Cedric? OMG! Now that's something of a surprise... o.o
Ohh, dinner!
Sixth: Ouch, poor Elyon. Anyway, awesome song. Ohh, Elyon's mom's awesomer... if that's a word...
Forgive me for this, my friend, but I don't think I'll ever be able to get used to Sailormeridian... It fits, though.
Seventh: Oh, I love cackling, especially if it's maniatical cackilng! xD Anyway nice fighting scene!
Eigth: Goodness, this chapter's huge. xD And with Kitchen and dinner in the middle, it took a long time to read. Even so, I enjoyed it greatly. It was really, really good!
Great job! |
 Greki 2009-05-04 . chapter 1Lol, I had to look up both Sailor V and Usagi 'cause I couldn't remember. It's been so long since I've seen those series...
Anyway, Elyon should strive to be Elyon. XD
Oh, I just learned something today. I didn't know that you started High School at 15 over there. That's extremely rare here. How many years does High School last? Here it is either 2 or 3 years. I myself went to a 2-year High School.
Btw, good thing you wrote how to pronounce Kuēn's name, 'cause I actually read it as Ku-ehn, with the "e" more pronounced. |
 Guardian's Light 2009-04-30 . chapter 1Yay, Elyon's Sailor Moon. God, I want to watch Sailor Moon now. |
 heartofblades 2009-04-30 . chapter 3OH MY GOD. That was by far, awesome! I absolutely *lurved* the TxN hints and how you based him off of Jadeite.
And I was wondering how you would go about with Taranee's senshi name. I knew she'd either be Mars or Mercury, I just couldn't be sure. And that was amazingly clever how you snuck in all those hints and refs relating to Ami and Rei. The telepathy thing was great utilization of her powers in the actual show/comics.
And Phobos in the beginning was great too. He's the typical villain in my eyes and taking over Beryl's role (no matter how hilarious in my mind ^^') is quite befitting of him.
I've also got a clue as to the other senshi identities now, with my previously assumed identities of the Shitennou. While it sorta freaks me out, I think I've got the idea, now that Taranee's got the dual role of Merc and Mars. *sigh* So is it sorta like how there's no Sailor Earth, because we've already got Endymion in that place?
I guess the royalty's names will be based off of the first royalty of Meridian in the WITCH comics. It was that warrior, Escanor, and his wife, right? (Sorry, can't remember her name!) But, I might be getting ahead of myself (like I already haven't? XP)
Anyway, I was profoundly entertained for the entire chapter. Though, both the comments made by the Grumpers and that snotty girl from Taranee's school kinda frustrated me. And I just thought I'd let you know that I was reminded of Ikuko's outrages (both imagined and actual) from the anime and PGSM. That is, after Ellie's dad's reaction. Eesh, my parents are *almost* the same way. I'm glad I'm not being hauled off to any tutoring or cram school or whatever. However, that leaves me wondering if Mr. Brown will leave his daughter be now that she's made friends with the ever-intellectual Taranee Cook. (*gasp*! for dramatic effect)
Ah well, this was every bit enjoyable as the last and I look forward to whatever you've got planned next. Squishy, over and out! XD |
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