DUDE THIS STORY WAS AWESOME!

the story's awesome. all ur stories r. when r u going to write more?

I loved this story! Very cool! Thanks a bunch for this cute short!

wait...let me get this straight...the first part is somewhat ath's day dream? n the 2nd one is real...? so in layman's terms, in the 1st part, ath was kinda being emo in their relationship by making him 'the other man'...oh...i get it...

neway, this one shot is cool! the description is awesome...the gestures...it's so nicely made! kudos to you! this is a great one shot!

waiting for your future fics,
-nareiya

wahahahaha!
okay,that was very UNEXPECTED!
Nice and Cute!
^^

Man, you made me believe something else, lol... really funny though... Aiden made me crack up more... awesome job

LMAO!! That was so funny.

Ha ha lol I thought she married someone else xD Such a great one shot :D

OMG! I actually fell for it! I thought that the role-playing they were doing was true and then when it went to the present day, i thought that that was their next life that they actually were together. WOW! You got me fooled!

HAHA! I love their son! So hilarious!

i see. theirs a twist in the end? ne? correct me if im wrong? its a role play at first aight? gah. but i wish you could do long chaptered stories again! cheeriohs!

I've got to say, you got me there. I was kinda confused. But yeah. Good job. Haha. Aiden's so cute. Reason: my parents are screwing around. XDD Great job.