Reviews for All What I'm Living For
Anonymous 6/13/13 . chapter 8
ohhhh nice plot i hope u u would update soon :)
Loveless Daya 3/23/13 . chapter 8
This fic was one of the best fics I have ever read. Thank you for writing it. I hope you will make a new chapter. I know you made this fic a long time ago. I hope you will remember abt this. Kissu and good luck
Guest 2/20/13 . chapter 8
PLEASE WRITE MORE I LOVE YOUR FANFICTION AND YOU ARE THE AMAZINGEST WRITER EVER
Mixxie 11/22/12 . chapter 8
I love this story! 3
it's good, please update :D
death angel shadw kat 9/26/12 . chapter 8
whoa nya *speechless in a good way*
miszhatter 7/27/12 . chapter 8
you need to update sooooooooooooooon. i really can't wait for the next one.
TW 7/10/12 . chapter 8
I love this story! It's probably the best Ren x Ai I've ever read! Please update soon or I will die!
Anna 2/19/11 . chapter 8
Oooo! Keep going! I mean it! I love this story 3
Izashi koruto 7/29/10 . chapter 8
very good so far
mitsukiangel 6/23/10 . chapter 1
Cute! Or is that the right word. . . ?

Okay, but its good.
Tsubaki Juri 4/29/10 . chapter 8
next chapter please! haha! this story is so cute!

i can't help but wonder though...what would happen if gil fell for ai? haha i bet it'll be so messed up that it's actually cute!
violet404 4/25/10 . chapter 8
I really love your story so far and I also like Renai. I hope you update soon and can't wait to find out what happens next.
Ayashi Tetsuko 1/15/10 . chapter 3
Hey, I like your story :D I think it has a very nice concept, with Ren being a med student, and the people around him.

However, sometimes it felt as if you were in a hurry when you write a scene. For example, even though they were all close friends, it feels a bit weird for kion to suddenly talked about something so serious right after they talked abt something happy. Also when Yuuzuki first appeared.

My suggestion is try to describe more. The characters' feelings, the situation around. Add more details, more emphasize. Reduce the pace so that readers can really enjoy the moment. No need to hurry

Keep up the good work
aiandren12 1/15/10 . chapter 8
THAT... WAS TOTALY WICKED GREAT I LOVED THIS CHAPTER KEEP UP THE CHAPTERS AND PLEASE DO AT LEAST 5 MORE CHAPTERS IT WOULD MAKE MY DAY TOO. [:
Kana 1/9/10 . chapter 7
O! I want to know!

Please update soon!
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