Nice job, but could you please tell me where did Sword go to school?

Heh. I ain't really seen something like this in a while. Were those lyrics to a song? Anywho, they fit perfectly with the story.

Ah, yes. Edgar Allan Poe. (One of my favourites, strangely)

Good job, hon! Keep up the good work! ;D

Andi Rose

By far, the best ShadowxMaria fanfic I have ever read. I loved every single moment of it. I can find nothing to critique, wonderful job. :)

... *sniff*

okay... You won't cry, Melody. *starts crying*

It's okay *sniff* the song fits *sniff* well with the story *sob*

well done *sniff and sob*

The song fits perfectly with the situation,great like that!

That was so sad! How could you write that? Poor Shadow all alone with out his true love Maria. Sorry to be a littlemean but it always makes me mad to read love story's of this pair they always seem to end sad for some reason or ethier people state that the just friends, its so annoying thereso in love. Anyways I hope you make a sequel I really wanna knows what happened to Shadow and what was the deal with the Maria ghost just disapearing? She should have said more to him. I hope you get around to fixing this I hope because this is just sad.