This was aces. I've never read your stories before (maybe I have?) but this has definitely inspired me to read everything else by you. You're a really wicked good writer.

Thanks for sharing!

I've always wondered about Jamie.

Very interesting take on it. Intriguing story

Very nicely done.

It seemed clear that Lisa was behaving that way at the party just to see if Susanna would get jealous. It worked to serve Lisa's need for control of the situation since Susanna took the lead with their first kiss.

Thanks for posting.

See ya...

intense, i liked it. i feel like you write her inner voice so well