You wrote lily juts like i picture her.
and they way that the story flowed as really nice.
this is and all round great story that i am lucky to have had the chance of reading.
Keep on writing
Drops

I only started reading this story because i wanted to read the sequel ( i never read sequels when i haven't read the story that came before it) and I have to say that this story it thoroughly marvelous!

just wanted to give you a piece of my good mind^^
xoxo
Cherry

wow you are increadible at writing, great wording and really intruiging story

cute pairing. i somehow find it sweeter than scorpiusXrose

I am normally not a fan of Scorpius/Lily, but I think this fic has converted me. Really excellent writing and description; the characters are spot on! Witty and intelligent dialogue makes this story a gem. Why you aren't getting more reviews for this is a mystery to me. I'll definitely have to check more of your works! :)

really good. one of the best i've yet to read.

wow hahaha that was good lol

good story and all