Reviews for Magic and Fireflies

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Megan Consoer 2007-10-24 ch 4,	abuseI really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
Yuki Snow and Silver Ganyme... 2006-03-26 ch 4,	abuseblinks wow, that is one long name Hotaru has. But wouldn't they have said her surname and then her forenames (like Potter, Harry or Granger, Hermione). Interesting to see where the name came from though. Hotaru's a Gryffindor? I'm a little surprised by that seeing as she's ususally a Slytherin or a Ravenclaw, but its good to have a change once in a while. You can't end it there! But darn, this hasn't been updated in over four years. Oh well. I know this is probably dead now but I hope you continue it someday. Please?
Yuki Snow and Silver Ganyme... 2006-03-26 ch 3,	abuseThere were quite a few typos in that but it was still a pretty good chapter. So Dumbledore is Hotaru's grandfather? I've never seen that one before, so that's good. Now onto chapter four.
Yuki Snow and Silver Ganyme... 2006-03-26 ch 2,	abuseGood chapter, but you still need to start a new paragraph for each new speaker. I also wonder why Crabbe and Goyle weren't with Draco; I would have thought he would have been too much of a coward to go round bullying people on his own (take chapter nine (I think) in book one for an example.) Also Malfoy's eyes are grey, not blue. I wonder who 'Kiki' actually is... muses. Anyway, now I'm going to read chapter three.
Yuki Snow and Silver Ganyme... 2006-03-26 ch 1,	abuseThis is pretty interesting so far. However you should start a new paragraph when a different person speaks. Also Harry's eyes are green, not dark brown. Also it seemed a bit rushed to me; maybe a little more description of places and thoughts would do it good: the very beginning especially seemed rushed. But other than that this is good, I'm off to read chapter 2 now.
Taeniaea 2005-04-04 ch 4,	abuseI Love The Chapter: 4 PLz Plz Update It Soon!!
Taeniaea 2005-04-04 ch 3,	abuseI Love The Chapter: 3
Taeniaea 2005-04-04 ch 2,	abuseI Love The Chapter: 2
Taeniaea 2005-04-04 ch 1,	abuseI Love The Chapter: 1
Angel of Death 2004-03-17 ch 4, anon.	abuseUh. veery interesting , but what a long name for Hotaru ! PLEASE UPDATE !! CAN this be a Hotaru/Harry please ?! I would really appreciated ! ^-^ Also can you make it loonger ? Hee hee your fic is fabulous, and I really hope you make it a Hotaru/Harry fic ! There's just one more thing I got to say : HOTARU AND HARRY ! hOTARU AND HARRY ! HOTARU AND HARRY ! HOTARU AND HARRY ! HOTARU AND HARRY ! HOTARU AND HARRY PLEASE ! Well , I think that's enough and you get my point ! Well, please consider making it a H/H fic and update faster asap ! Don't 4get to make it longer ! ^-^ I know its too much to ask , but my top wish is please make it a Hotaru and harry and UPDATE ! You should never give up on a ficcy that's really good ! PLEASE UPDATE ! Down ! Hee hee hee ... hope ya update sooner and you know what i'm bout ta say ... please make it a h/h fic ! me would really like it ! ^-^ bye bye ! ^_^
Aleh 2003-12-09 ch 2,	abuseParagraph breaks in dialogue are NOT optional.
GothicKitty01 2003-10-31 ch 4,	abusePlz keep going with this! it's so cool! 1 of the best Hotaru going to Hogwarts fics ever! Plz keep going!
HDE 226868 2003-09-27 ch 4,	abuseYay. I like Hotaru. I hope you can update this soon ^^ And~ Hotaru doe have a rediculous long name. but I can ignore that. You just gave me the best idea! Sayonara!
Rhea Hiryuu 2003-08-19 ch 4,	abuseHOTARU ROCKS! lol, Please update soon because this story is really kewel!
chibimars098524 2003-08-13 ch 4, anon.	abuseThis is really good, please continue.

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