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rmiller92
2009-09-27 . chapter 6
YES! I love that old woman. She's hilarious. And please update soon. Tyki and Lavi are so cute.
Your-Frienemy
2009-09-12 . chapter 6
lmao, honest to God, in the first chapter or second where they mentioned Tricia's sickness, I was like 'ZOMG, ZE SWINEFLU!' DD: but they didn't have it back then I just realized... >.>

anywho~ it was a good story and I really like how you went from Tyki being reluctant to warming up, and now we get to see how he is around his like 'natural' family you know? Love his mom, btw! <3 xD
Flattered By Mockery
2009-09-07 . chapter 6
Oh my god, I've missed this story. xD
Sorry, I forgot that I had updates on stories I was watching...
D:
BUT THIS UPDATE WAS SUPERTASTIC. 8D
I cracked up so many times - especially with Rhode thinking that Tyki was teaching Lavi how to kiss. Well, at least she didn't find out about what they were really talking about - which - by the way, is hurting my brain. Tyki's such a damn tease. D:
Them discussing how they got together was cute though, as well as the ending with their hands. Heh. I know there can't be any real romance yet, but.. it comes soon ? :3
And I like Lilith, I really do. xD She's pretty intense.

Sorry about the late review, but..
I hope you continue this. C:
BRP
2009-09-07 . chapter 6
Please update soon. I really do love Tyki's mum and i hope to see more of her.
ChikaMikk10
2009-09-06 . chapter 6
haha Im definitly loving where this story is going. Ive been giggling my way all through each chapter. The bickering between Tyki and Lavi is what I love the best. So thanks for writing and I hope to read the next chapter ^^.
ps. Rhode kicks arse. I love they way you've writting her
Jackidy
2009-09-04 . chapter 6
Tyki has the perfect, embarrassing mother everyone ahtes to have but more then likely does. I was half expecting her to come out with a story of him when he was a child. Aweosme chapter me deary, can't wait for the next one
BloodAmulet
2009-08-27 . chapter 6
I think I luv Tyki's mother!
lol
This is really getting good. The interaction between the characters is well laid out and I'm quite enjoying it.
I can hardly wait until you have the next chapter up. :3
Elise
2009-08-26 . chapter 1
and i feel like an idiot because i just noticed there were 6 chapters to this (doesnt know how to work FF ><) i'll be reading em all!
Elise
2009-08-26 . chapter 1
SNORT.

I loved this.

<3

your wordplay is quite amusing here. LOVED IT.

you should write a continuation chapter. ;D
Tofu-Master
2009-08-21 . chapter 6
GAH! o.0

This is bloody BRILLIANT! x3
I think my favorite parts were when Tyki had ta wake Lavi up, an' unknowingly called him a "blasted thing"; an' when Lady Lilith came, an' cracked all those wonderful insults at our Tyki-pon~!!
Do ya have ANY idea how bloody HARD it is ta stiffle insane, hysterical laughter bubblin' up in my throat, so tha' i dun wake up my grandma (who's sleepin' in the NEXT ROOM), at 3:30am!? SHAME on ya, fer writin' somethin' so goddamn irresistably hilarious!!

Please, PLEASE update soon!! I can't wait ta read what happens next in this fine plot ya've cooked up!
<3
Tofu-Master
2009-08-21 . chapter 5
Hello! I must say, this fanfic is fantastic!! I'd like ta apologize fer not reviewin' the previous chapters, firstly. I've jus' started readin' it tanight, so i was plannin' on leavin' one rig long review on chapter 6. But there's somethin' in this chapter tha's left me a wee bit confused.

When you referred ta Dr. Bellamy as "Angeline's revenge", an' "Angeline's curse", what did ya mean? The only thing i can think of is tha' perhaps Rhode had killed her, he was close ta her, an' brought her back as an Akuma. But, tha' also dun make sense ta me, b'cuz if Bellamy was actually an Akuma possessed by Angeline's soul, then i'd have thought he'd have obeyed/been helpful ta the Kamelots. Sorry if this is at all offencive, but could ya please reply, an' explain this ta me? I know it's jus' a minor detail, an' it dun take away from my enjoyment of the story (which i'm now in LOVE with, by the way. <3 ) at all, but it's somethin' tha' i'll now be wonderin' 'bout, till it's clear.

Thanks a bunch, dear!! An' sorry fer the long, lame review. -sweatdrops-
whitebengal14
2009-08-18 . chapter 6
hee hee. reminds me of "A Game of Poker" XD3
terracannon876
2009-08-17 . chapter 6
Awesome XD I swear, a woman named Lilith? Only she would be able to have one over Tyki (and maybe Sherrill, but Sherrill sounds like the GOOD son who never gets into trouble whereas Tyki's the damn rogue XD).

I love how, in the previous chapter, the moral of the story is if you bonk your head enough, information from "past lives" will come floating up XD I like how Lavi randomly started spewing Hebrew. I think that it's weird that the family would hire a quack doctor in the first place though, considering how they're probably rich and can fire / re-hire as many doctors as they want.

I wonder if you're going to go anywhere with Lavi's past? But even if you don't, I'll be looking forward to see what you do with this ... new Innocence Tyki has in store. Gods, he's like dangling a carrot in front of a bunny >_>

Oh, and I find the story hilarious =) Just so you know. Thanks for the story and hope you update soon!
I Spaz With Pizzazz
2009-08-15 . chapter 6
Ahaha, Tyki's mother isn't what I was expecting to find, but I do most certainly like her. ^^

Looking forward to the next chapter! 8D
~Pizzazz
Cat-Tuong
2009-08-12 . chapter 6
Lol, I love Lilith. She sounds just like my mom though I'm not sure about the marriage and whatnots. I'm way too underage but besides that, I can imagine my mom in this story. I also loved the second and third parts of the story where Lavi and Tyki discuss how they "came to be" as Lavi put it ^^ Great job on this chapter and the whole story so far. Keep it up ^^ I can't wait to read more ^^
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