 Heather-Hitsugaya 2009-11-19 . chapter 6Oh my GAWD that was a funny chapter XD, i think i like tykis mom. Anyway good chapter hope you update soon! |
 rmiller92 2009-09-27 . chapter 6YES! I love that old woman. She's hilarious. And please update soon. Tyki and Lavi are so cute. |
 Your-Frienemy 2009-09-12 . chapter 6lmao, honest to God, in the first chapter or second where they mentioned Tricia's sickness, I was like 'ZOMG, ZE SWINEFLU!' DD: but they didn't have it back then I just realized... >.>
anywho~ it was a good story and I really like how you went from Tyki being reluctant to warming up, and now we get to see how he is around his like 'natural' family you know? Love his mom, btw! <3 xD |
 Flattered By Mockery 2009-09-07 . chapter 6Oh my god, I've missed this story. xD
Sorry, I forgot that I had updates on stories I was watching...
D:
BUT THIS UPDATE WAS SUPERTASTIC. 8D
I cracked up so many times - especially with Rhode thinking that Tyki was teaching Lavi how to kiss. Well, at least she didn't find out about what they were really talking about - which - by the way, is hurting my brain. Tyki's such a damn tease. D:
Them discussing how they got together was cute though, as well as the ending with their hands. Heh. I know there can't be any real romance yet, but.. it comes soon ? :3
And I like Lilith, I really do. xD She's pretty intense.
Sorry about the late review, but..
I hope you continue this. C: |
 BRP 2009-09-07 . chapter 6Please update soon. I really do love Tyki's mum and i hope to see more of her. |
 ChikaMikk10 2009-09-06 . chapter 6haha Im definitly loving where this story is going. Ive been giggling my way all through each chapter. The bickering between Tyki and Lavi is what I love the best. So thanks for writing and I hope to read the next chapter ^^.
ps. Rhode kicks arse. I love they way you've writting her |
 Jackidy 2009-09-04 . chapter 6Tyki has the perfect, embarrassing mother everyone ahtes to have but more then likely does. I was half expecting her to come out with a story of him when he was a child. Aweosme chapter me deary, can't wait for the next one |
 BloodAmulet 2009-08-27 . chapter 6I think I luv Tyki's mother!
lol
This is really getting good. The interaction between the characters is well laid out and I'm quite enjoying it.
I can hardly wait until you have the next chapter up. :3 |
 Elise 2009-08-26 . chapter 1 and i feel like an idiot because i just noticed there were 6 chapters to this (doesnt know how to work FF ><) i'll be reading em all! |
 Elise 2009-08-26 . chapter 1 SNORT.
I loved this.
<3
your wordplay is quite amusing here. LOVED IT.
you should write a continuation chapter. ;D |
 Tofu-Master 2009-08-21 . chapter 6GAH! o.0
This is bloody BRILLIANT! x3
I think my favorite parts were when Tyki had ta wake Lavi up, an' unknowingly called him a "blasted thing"; an' when Lady Lilith came, an' cracked all those wonderful insults at our Tyki-pon~!!
Do ya have ANY idea how bloody HARD it is ta stiffle insane, hysterical laughter bubblin' up in my throat, so tha' i dun wake up my grandma (who's sleepin' in the NEXT ROOM), at 3:30am!? SHAME on ya, fer writin' somethin' so goddamn irresistably hilarious!!
Please, PLEASE update soon!! I can't wait ta read what happens next in this fine plot ya've cooked up!
<3 |
 Tofu-Master 2009-08-21 . chapter 5Hello! I must say, this fanfic is fantastic!! I'd like ta apologize fer not reviewin' the previous chapters, firstly. I've jus' started readin' it tanight, so i was plannin' on leavin' one rig long review on chapter 6. But there's somethin' in this chapter tha's left me a wee bit confused.
When you referred ta Dr. Bellamy as "Angeline's revenge", an' "Angeline's curse", what did ya mean? The only thing i can think of is tha' perhaps Rhode had killed her, he was close ta her, an' brought her back as an Akuma. But, tha' also dun make sense ta me, b'cuz if Bellamy was actually an Akuma possessed by Angeline's soul, then i'd have thought he'd have obeyed/been helpful ta the Kamelots. Sorry if this is at all offencive, but could ya please reply, an' explain this ta me? I know it's jus' a minor detail, an' it dun take away from my enjoyment of the story (which i'm now in LOVE with, by the way. <3 ) at all, but it's somethin' tha' i'll now be wonderin' 'bout, till it's clear.
Thanks a bunch, dear!! An' sorry fer the long, lame review. -sweatdrops- |
 whitebengal14 2009-08-18 . chapter 6hee hee. reminds me of "A Game of Poker" XD3 |
 terracannon876 2009-08-17 . chapter 6Awesome XD I swear, a woman named Lilith? Only she would be able to have one over Tyki (and maybe Sherrill, but Sherrill sounds like the GOOD son who never gets into trouble whereas Tyki's the damn rogue XD).
I love how, in the previous chapter, the moral of the story is if you bonk your head enough, information from "past lives" will come floating up XD I like how Lavi randomly started spewing Hebrew. I think that it's weird that the family would hire a quack doctor in the first place though, considering how they're probably rich and can fire / re-hire as many doctors as they want.
I wonder if you're going to go anywhere with Lavi's past? But even if you don't, I'll be looking forward to see what you do with this ... new Innocence Tyki has in store. Gods, he's like dangling a carrot in front of a bunny >_>
Oh, and I find the story hilarious =) Just so you know. Thanks for the story and hope you update soon! |
 I Spaz With Pizzazz 2009-08-15 . chapter 6Ahaha, Tyki's mother isn't what I was expecting to find, but I do most certainly like her. ^^
Looking forward to the next chapter! 8D
~Pizzazz |
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