needs to be longer but its ok

Okay, so I got the thanks out of the way for dark elves that acted like drow. This time, you had me up until you ghad to give her purple eyes. Okay, it's a fantasy setting, but still.

Outside of that, though, the story is very well written so far. Not very far along, obviously, but the descriptions and character introductions are dead on for both of the main characters. Also, the setting is well defined, and a foreshadowing of the plot(or so I would assume) is well handled in how Liena thinks about the dangers of dark elves in the valley. So very good, so far.

What the...? What is this? Dark elves, acting like dark elves? Surely you must be kidding me!

No, really, thank you. It's been so long since I've seen an evil drow, that I thought they no longer existed...

Hah! That's what they get for underestimating the dark elves! Nah, I'm just kidding...sort of. Anyways, good start, hope to see more.

I'm sorry to say it, but... I was really rooting for the drow to catch him. _; Anyway, I really liked the story. The language of the drow was especially impressive. Myself, I have been meaning to write some D&D fics, but so far I have one original story a a few Pokemon fics (go ahead, fry me with a fireball, I know you want to). I have a few started, one of them about a drow (one who does NOT suffer from Drizztism) but I'm just too damned lazy to finsh them. ::sigh:: I need to get off my lazy arse and do something for a change... anyway, this was terrific! I much applaud. ::bows::

"Beware ye the hour when no light shines."

-Dark