Oh...creepy! Very Village of the Damned. I like how the vagueness reflects Sam's fearful, then detached(and not-nessesarily-lucid) mental state. And to think of our boys meeting their end in that way...Ugh.

Great horror story.

I really liked this story, but I feel you should continue it.

What is killing the people (you imply there is more than one when you say "when the first body appears"); how does Sam and Dean find out and deal with whatever is killing them; how does Dean react when he realizes that Sam was right. Since I consider myself a "Sammy girl" I hope that this story will have lot of Sammy "angst" and maybe a "lot" of Sammy gets hurt and Dean gets protective, as this story seems to read that it is before John makes his deal.

I really hope that you will continue with this story, because the way you ended it, it is just crying out for more.

Thank you.

that's it? what? come on! that's no ending... jk it is... but i want more of the story!