 XWhiteRabbitX 4/25/12 . chapter 1Woah dude, kickass! :D I love it! Really awesome idea. I love Kyles cupcake. That so brilliant. And Kenny's dialog is awesome too |
 silver neko girl 1/25/12 . chapter 1Dear fucking god, I think I love you. Your writing is truly exceptional. I find myself aching for the another chapter. I must admit that I don't really understand Stan's traumatic past, though. The church was mentioned, and we know the church's history with young boys, so... Yeah. I don't know what to think.
Poor Stan. Poor Kyle. Poor Bebe's kid. Poor Kenny. Poor Pip.
Especially Pip. Dude is one of my favorite characters. So is Wendy; I wonder how she's dealt with all this. And where is Cartman...
Also, I am in love with Butters and his tub. It's so real to me, that hd could grow into this. I'm not usually one for BuNny, either, but they're so natural about it. I'm confused over whether Butters has an erotic bakery or if it's just normal, though.
Please keep writing. Please. |
 Lying Honesty DEACTIVATED 11/25/11 . chapter 1I'm not sure if it's worth asking, but are you still going to finish this? It seems like a waste not to. It's beautifully written, wonderfully executed. I really do love your writing, I'm just sad that you seem to have lost your drive. :( |
 Evie Antorcha 10/26/11 . chapter 1This was was nothing short of amazing... And the ending was serious heart breaker. I know it's been a while but you must continue this. |
 Oriental Nightmare 8/8/11 . chapter 1I don't know whether you'll continue this but I really hope you do. I love Kenny in this story, and Butter's bakery's so sweet and creative! Please update I really wanna know what their history is, and few author has the talent like yours that makes me cling to the storyline. |
 eatthefrog 12/30/10 . chapter 1UGH YOU NEED TO DO PART 2! I'm seriously. |
 Kumakii 11/13/10 . chapter 1It has been a couple of years since I read something of this fandom, but this has been a great way of starting again.
I hope that you upload the continuation of this fanfic someday. |
 Wolfwhispers 11/10/10 . chapter 1This story is very depressing, but I'm completely drawn into it. I know its been a long time but I really hope you continue this amazing story! |
 theshadowswhisper 6/6/10 . chapter 1okay, I am addicted to your writing. I've read everything on here. You are a goddess. A. Total. Goddess. |
 AcidBubblewrap 4/27/10 . chapter 1I know this story probably won't get updated- but I still just wanted to take the time and say I think this story is not only amazing but also so incredibly original it's crazy. Even half way complete, it's better than most, if not nearly all, of the huge sp fanfics I've read on this site.
hopefully, you'll find time to finish this- but I still wanted to let you know that even if you don't, it's an incredible story overall |
 Nigiri Ashika 4/25/10 . chapter 1I really hope that you decide to continue this. It is beautiful and I hate to have to stop halfway through. Take your time, but please don't abandon something so... powerful. |
 ketamine.methanol 1/30/10 . chapter 1I honestly could read this story over a million times, it's probably my favourite out of all of them, because the relationships with the characters, to me, feels so personal. I feel like I'm in a film. Or maybe just another universe - regardless, it's a little mountain town and I'm strolling along with Kenny and Stan feeling the shock in my chest about Kyle's cupcake.
I seriously, with all my heart hope that you one day provide us with the second portion to this story. It's one of my favourite writes. |
 itsmenotyoulol 1/23/10 . chapter 1M yummy 3 |
 The Brat Prince 1/6/10 . chapter 1 I reviewed this back in July (which is why I can't log in and review a second time), and now I shall review again- there needs to be an update on this like, stat. :) It is uncomfortable and excellent and requires continuation. |
 Oceanaid 11/26/09 . chapter 1You want to get better... I don't know how I can offer you any criticism, though. Maybe I'm having an emotional day, but I cried...
Butters baking the cupcakes was amazing. I was very surprised when Kenny revealed that there was nothing in Kyle's, and I began crying when I realized Stan was incarcerated because he had a big heart, I suppose because he couldn't forget.
Please write the second part soon. I will definitely be waiting. |