nice story

hey, this is pretty nice! :)

Ahh this is so sweet. I love the idea of Sirius telling Harry not to go out of bounds. This is great the relationship between Harry and Sirius in it is brillaint. I love it :)

I really like how you've done this, I've always thought that Sirius - and even Remus - should've written to Harry more, you should write another one about how Sirius talks to Harry after the 3rd task, as well as 1st and 2nd.

You should make a sequal about Sirius talking to Harry after the 3rd task. Good story...loved it!

Excellent, I always had a problem with that part in the book, but from your perspective it would make sense. Thanks

Wonderful!

Loved every word!

I like this story. It was very well writen. Well done.

I had to laugh listening to Sirius going 'do as I say, not as I do and/or did!'. But he's right about not having a madman with Harry in his sights (in his day, they were the people that others had to be afraid of). Anyway, good one-shot.

Hey!
This story is amazing, really! Both Sirius and Harry are so characteristically and perfectly portrayed here. I love their relationship, the whole situation described in this story, the way that Sirius comfort Harry - everything. And Harry's behavior is so typically - just perfect. So are Sirius.
I wish you'd continue it too!

Iva (HarryJamesPotter-Black)

Fantastic. Amazing. Perfectly, absolutely in character throughout. I love it!

It was so sweet :)
I always wanted to read a fiction where Sirius would give a lecture to Harry about his "rule breaking" ^^

Very well done !

Cheers :)

(Sorry for my english, I'm not a native speaker ^^)

Lovely piece and if it had only happened in the book then perhapd Sirius would not have died!

Lovely little piece!! Sorry I'm so very behind when it comes to reviewing!! I'll re-read Crucio now and make up for that! And thanks for the third installment of Lily's Charm!^^

Oh, I really love this and I can't help but wish you'd continue it, even though I know you've got your hands full already! But you've really captured both Harry and Sirius, and their confusion about their relationship so well. Harry has no experience with a loving parent-figure setting limits, and it's completely unfamiliar territory for Sirius as well, but he's determined to try to keep Harry safe. I'd just love to read more here!