I'm not a fan of the pairing but this fic is fantastic! I like how Tia seems to have a lot of psychological issues about her apperance. The recurring themes about Tia making excuses, about colours and fakeness, were really interesting!

I really liked this. It was well written, and much better than most of the normal pairings you see for this series! I wish more people would write like this, instead of shoving their blatent self-insert OCs into this catergory. It'd make me much happier.

Such an unconventional pairing, yet it is written so well that I can't bring myself to whine at you for it not being D'JokxMei. Also, you didn't ruin Tia. I could understand why she would want to look good, and why she would feel some resentment towards Mei at some points for what she has. Although in my eyes, Tia is prettier anyway. Haw.

Beautiful. In my opinion, your style of writing is masterful. I love the whole thing with the make-up because it isn't really her personality, but she must feel like she's in Mei's shadow all the time. Fantastic!!

I don't think you've completely destoryed Tia, she just went through some emotional turmoil. After all, the poor girl has had her fair share of heartbreak.

You have problems with writing Rocket and Tia as well?! Me too!! I adore that pairing but I can't think of a good story!

A really nice piece, and the ending just seemed to fit with the entire thing so well. I always get the feeling D'Jok does hold a lot of respect for Tia from his actions towards her in the second series, so this made me really happy when I saw it.

A really nice piece, but I get the feeling you are going to be abused by MeixD'Jok fans for this fantastic thing. I've noticed none of the fanfiction for that pairing is very good though, so that'll probably be the main reason. Good work.

D'Jok always does seem to like Tia a bit, so I can try and understand this pairing. When Rocket leaves and they argue, you can see he is as upset as she is and he offers to take place against Rocket before she does alhtough eventually bending to her will during the Netherball match. A really beautiful piece, the ending really made me smile. People forget that Tia isn't perfect, and this shows her insecurity well so I don't think that it is entirely out of character.

Really great piece. I felt sorry for D'jok though, despite HATING him a fair amount and getting the feeling you're about to be abused by Meiock fans.

I love this. Very odd, but nice.

A really lovely piece. I liked it.

I still ike it. Quit whining.

A really pretty piece. I like the idea of it, and it's very sad. Don't worry about 'ruining' Tia, I really liked it. I think she must feel like that a lot, being around Mai. But I think she's prettier.