Please update, soon! I'm dying to read what happens next!

this better be continued, it's good!=D

Ah yes, an allusion to the Trojan War, by called Eric, "Paris". I like it. I like it. So many secrets...just like Pandora's Box.

xJadeRainx

Hm... Ariel with scarred eyes, instead of no voice. Very interesting indeed. Keep posting.

xJadeRainx

Eric certainly is not jealous on Prince Filbert. I can't wait for something exciting to happen. Prince Filbert is so... boring and selfish.

xJadeRainx

One second that lasted for a thousand years. What a beautiful line. Was it the voice of an Angel that Eric heard, or was it the voice of a... mermaid?

xJadeRainx

This is a very interesting twist on the movie. Prince Filbert, Yuck! I can't wait to see how this story develops.

xJadeRainx

gr8
Update please

I love the concept of this story. I'm very eager to see how it plays out. Nice touch with the Pandora's box tapestry, btw.

please continue this story! it seems so interesting and i really want to see how you will play it out. UPDATE!

The story idea is sound and you set up future events with this last scene quite well. I look forward to reading more.

Gemini

This looks interesting. I hope to see more chapters.