just a hint, mabey you want to translate this in to english for those of us not intellegent enough to read what ever language this is written in.

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You are a very good writer, amazing with imagery! A sweet story vividly told and allowing the reader to think!

Wonderful. I love the way you wrote this. Very poetic and it commanded all of my attention to every comparison and explanation. A truly heartfelt moment in time. Bravo