Good read, but just one tiny little nitpick: you seem to randomly change tense midway. It doesn't flow very well if you start in past, and switch to present without warning.

Hey!I loved the story.I wrote a story my self go check it...

and thats a demand...lol!Just kidding...I think.

Liked the concept, thought the execution/flow could have been done a little better. Nonetheless, it gave me a couple of giggles at the mental image of Nell and Iris trailing a thoroughly embarrassed Edge through town. Kudos!

Mwahahaha. Cute.

Oh. Delsus in the Bunny Suit. I still can't believe he can equip that. *evil grin*

Please do Eternal Mana next! If I can remember correctly another interesting item happened to be this see-through night-gown... :)

I laughed my ass off. XD I'm thinking of starting an Edge-Facepalm-Counter...

Anyway, I definitely think you should continue. AI Awareness day for the win! D I was thinking of writing something for EM later... kekeke...

-Aion 13