now that is what i am talking about it,that was really great i like these moments with michel and his thought it really shows me alot about his character and great way to introduce another storyline,u got my attention so run with it.

WHOA THAT WAS really sweet of him wonder who is hunting them now and how kerry gets involved
maria

happy you updated =)
can't wait till you update again.
i can never get enough Michel.
when will Kerry finally see or find out that Michel is around?
And we've got vampire hunters again, I see.
=D
can't wait to read more.

Up...date...soon.

Love the subtle menace of the chapter as it progressed. I definitely liked seeing the soft side of Ethan Bryne, aka Michel.

Anyways, hope to see an update soon!

I love it! Your as good as a pro author. Please write more. Could not find any mistakes. can't wait for Michel and Kerry to meet agian

so i finally sat down and read this story with time and patience, so my advice on it is i have seen this mother daugther story been developed before and i am not really a fan of it but i would love to see your take on it and i really like that the family has passed on.I am not really sure michel reactions would be like the story dictates but everyone has their own opinion.well i am deffo interested so keep going.

whoa wonder what mom will say. And what ethan/ micheal will say or do
maria

As the chapters get longer, the story becomes that more interesting. This is really good, I can't wait to see what the next chapter will be like. keep up the good work!

I'm really enjoying this story; well, as much as I can enjoy a story without Ian and Kerry's dad. I am glad to see that you didn't forget Kerry's mother, too.
Can't wait to see where you go with this!

Grr, the fact that her mother actually came after she abandoned them for SO long made me mad. I'm glad you updated your CotN fanfic! We definitely needed A update, since we all hardly update anymore :(

Keep writing! I will keep reading :) It was a nice, calm chapter.

I copletly ador it please dont stop! You are a genius that is excatly what needed to happen for KErry to become a true character of the night

I'm sure one of your many admires Danelle!

This is a really good start ,its all totally working and i love the phone call,that was pretty clever but as much as i like moody michel,he needs to come out already.update soon plz.

Oh come on! Why so short?
Anyways, I'm glad you continued this! Update soon :)

this is awesome! I am loving this story I can't wait until you update again, I'm so glad I found it.
Looks like Michel gave in to his desire- can't wait to see what will happen next!

Hey this is good! Please continue, and it is really an interesting fanfic!