You did a good job of bringing out the angst in Ermengarde, not that it isn't hard to do. I look forward to reading more chapters of this story, soon.

-Pearl Bramble of Willowbottom.

This is a good chapter so far. Something I'd like explained if you ever get the chance to revise this chapter, is what made Lavinia have a change of heart?

-Pearl Bramble of Willowbottom.

Ever read "Wishing for Tomorrow?" It's a sequel to "A Little Princess" :)

:o I thought Lavinia hated Sara. But in case you didn't know, abusers need their victim like we need air.

Aw, so sad. Great job. Catch ya on the flip side.

Wait a minute, I thought old Minchin was a chimney sweep. I guess you decided to change that. Who would have guessed Lavina had a heart, the first time I saw the movie I was in shock. I think this story promises to be interesting...

Will there be an update anytime, perhaps soon *hint hint :o)*? I really do love this story and would like to read more of it.

Wow! This is a good story idea! I love it so far. This is a great movie, and it's cool to read something like this, a continuation kinda. I hope you update soon!

a good story yes but i must point out that Miss Minchin (may she burn in hell) was made a chimmney sweep helper

Awesome story, Lolly! I love this movie! Good idea for a story, too! I've been waiting for you to submit a chapter...update soon!

Hello! This is the author of this story! Thank you for taking the time to read this...please review! (This chapter is told in the point of view of Lavinia.)