hm just make sure to get in the required Brian getting his ass handed to him quota

Hi,
you will update again, won't you?
i noticed the date of the last update and I would love to read more. I hope things are going okay in your life. :)

Please write more of this story-it's the best one I
read lately

Nice twist here

I've read three chapters and absolutely love your story. I felt the movie went to fast and you pick up the slack and make it into an interesting character description. Good job, more, please.

im so happy to see that you've finally updated this story. granted i just now find it a month after the chapter release date. i was so worried that you decided to discontinue this story. whew! thank goodness for small miracles... your story is by far the best fast and the furious fic out there! it keeps me excited and i am so happy to see that you kept Letty alive! please continue this absolutely marvelous story. you really are a gifted writer.

ahahahahahahahaha (im not laughing at you(well i kinda am because that chapter was pretty darn good, and u might be just a touch delusional to think it was bad)) but the other thing Im laughing at is that I went through the same exact thing!! I didn't write for a while cuz I got really really sick(nothing long term but that's not important!!) and that was like three months ago and I still don't like what I'm churning out!! But trust me as a writer I totally understand, and as a reader of this lovely story I think ur absolutely crazy, because it's totally fine(a touch bit fillerish(which is why I think u don't like it as much as we do(only guessing at that tho!!))!!

anywho onto the review part of this review!! SQUEE Protective Brian SQUEE! What can I say, im totally in love with brian and he and Mia are my favorite! so any little thing where he's all angry and stuff makes me a happy camper!! (especially when u hint there will be more to come YAYY!

and I love Mia in this chapter, "Well, I don't want to see him." hehehehe I giggled inside! Plus Malodorous, Perfect touch, I love it. Plus- He could leave, and never be heard from again. But she knew. Knew that he would definitely come for her. Like she loved him, surely he loved her. She could feel it in his touch, see it in his eyes. Every time he looked at her, it was obvious. Mia had never felt such attraction, such a pull to anyone in her entire life.- SO true! good lord u capture these characters so well it's scary! like legit, are u sure u didn't come up with these people?

And, and and and and and, DOM AND LETTY! EP do u have any idea how hard it is for me to be sad when Im watching the movie?? seriously, when they show her getting shot all that's running through my mind is, "Oh well, she's fine!" and then im like, wait a tic...
It's really funny I watched it wit my cousin and she was like why aren't you crying and I was like cuz she isn't dead, and she was like really, and then I was like no.(waow could I have said like enough times in that story, oh well I'm too lazy to go back and delete them all (see normally im not like that, so it's kinda funny!!)) So yeah, from now on im just gunna pretend that ur story is an actual continuation of this movie, cuz it legit could be, easily!

anyway, I think that's it for the evening, I am very very very excited for the next chapter, and once again Im super sorry I missed the review request! Please forgive me!
xoxo
Tyler

Good lord, you must think I am a HORRIBLE fan!! you ask one simple thing of us, dear lord in heaven I am glad that you didn't stop cuz I think i would have legit cried! I have been without internet with the exceptions of the times I can post(ok so I hav been in MV for most of the summer and the only internet is at this cafe and I could only go a couple of times, and I only had enough time to post!! Then I went to canada where i am right now, and we got the internet installed yesterday morning! mother of pearl has this been difficult!) for my own story, and believe me, i have been pissed! ok so this isn't going to be one of my usually long reviews, but i will have one of those for ch 8/9 it's just I has to go eat right now, and I want to be able to savor this next installment of this wonderfully amazing story!

ps- I just watched F&F like 18 times since it just came out on dvd (SQUE!)
PSS oh and because I have been a horribly lousy fan I made something for you to make up for it!! I hope you like it, if not that's fine too, I just thought it would be a nice gesture that i would use in hopes of gaining your forgiveness for not reviewing!
/cgi/set?id=11342402&.msg=BQcCAQQDAgoLU2V0IHVwZGF0ZWQAHY29udGVudAoDbXNnABHR5cGU

PSS if the link doesn't come up let me know and Ill email it to you!!

update please

I really like how you write. The plot is fantastic. It could easily be the plot for other Fast and Furious movie. Don't give up on this story, please. It's too good to be left unfinished.

Well you may not have liked how the chapter turned put but i think i works pretty well i liked the parts in mexico a little better then with dom and brian though i did like the last section in the car with letty and dom. I cant wait for the next update so please make it soon.

~Emma Rose~

Yay! You updated!! Good chapter! Please update again soon =] This story is to good. - Jenn

woohoo, an update
please don't keep us waiting long, post more soon, we love Dotty moments, please,please, please :)

This chapter was one of those chapters that had to be written in order to get to the meat of everyone's individual experiences. Sometimes those chapters aren't the most interesting or heart stopping but without them the whole story would be lacking in continuity. So, with that being said, I can't wait to read the 'meat'. And a little Dom and Letty would do my heart good. He's in pain and angry and as usual that means he's a dick to the person he's closest to in the world. It might be interesting to delve a bit into his psyche.

Aww i dont think this chapter came out badly at all.the events in it were unfortunate, but im really glad u updated this story,, and hope you will continue to do so. Dom/Letty smut, cant wait lol