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Echan1263
2009-11-22 . chapter 17
haha! Great chapter! I loved it when Kiyohiko tricked Hans and Annje, I also love the CLAMP-hate there ;) Can't wait until the next chapter when, hopefully, Kiyohiko will go into Dying Will Mode! :D
Oblivious Obscenity
2009-11-21 . chapter 17
Not too long a chapter. It went quickly 'cause of the dialogue :3
There seem to be some racial (cultural?) tensions coming out, oh. Was that intentional?

Good job!
the Red King
2009-11-20 . chapter 17
yeah you updated i was really missing this anyways i like this chap but what those reborn means lets go to the festival? o well will find out later good job=D
Charpie
2009-11-19 . chapter 17
I've missed this story. It was a nice surprise to see it pop up in my inbox~

Wonderful chapter! I've been keeping up with Skywards as well and it didn't bother me that it was another festival chapter. With all this massive sharing of stories and such, ideas are going to cross paths and such. So no worries there~

I loved the comment on CLAMP and the fact that Kiyohiko had an opinion on them. Oh Annje~

The play between the older kids and the younger ones is hilarious. The whole "Screamer" thing had me laughing and the scene where Kiyohiko skillfully tricked them was brilliant. I also enjoyed the way it came and bit Kiyohiko in the ass in the end.

Great fun! I can't wait to read the next one!
A Midsummer Night's Dream
2009-10-04 . chapter 16
So it's Annje that makes interviews this time?Pfft!
the Red King
2009-09-24 . chapter 16
jajaja nice way to use the haruharu interview in the manga for Annje very funny and Yohi seems awesome i wish he has some cool weapon or The devil fork of the Fourth that will be fun =D
Amandy-san
2009-09-23 . chapter 16
HAHAHAHA

I wonder if Hana have some problem with Haru... (Maybe she thinks Haru is crazy or something alike... hahahaha)

Very good!
Please, update soon!
And I like the idea of Annje Annje Interviews ;D
Kisu's :**
ColinatorGX
2009-09-23 . chapter 16
Ahahahaah, an interview, Nice! ^^ I feel these are going to become very funny parts of the story.
ColinatorGX
2009-09-23 . chapter 15
Wow, this chapter was... a mass of outlandish destruction and funny madness clumped together. ^^
So wait in the Future Hans and Annje are... oh hell, what would their current sleves say if they knew xD
Yeh, I'm going to go with Masaeu being a little bit right and a little bit wrong too. Future Annje had a aring right? =)
Charpie
2009-09-23 . chapter 16
Hahahahaha! Haru, look what you've done!

Annje's pretty cute with her little tape recorder. I look forward to seeing her other interviews.
Erin Clover
2009-09-20 . chapter 15
Interesting metaphor, kick ball.
Kiyohiko cracks me up! He's like a Tsuna-Hayato cross. I think Reborn is taking a little too much lip, to be honest. That's not in his character. He probably should have smacked Yohi as soon as he started yelling.
Unless he's getting too old. ~_^
Good chapter!
Oblivious Obscenity
2009-09-19 . chapter 15
Reborn grinned! Horrors are sure to follow when Reborn's facial expression changes .O.

I do have predictions for the guardians, but they're very likely wrong, so let's wait and see. xD Maybe affinity is hereditary... -_-
Charpie
2009-09-17 . chapter 15
Hahaha. Aside from the obvious, my assumption of the guardians is probably wrong. We know about Haruhi and Masaru. As far as Damiano, Kiyohiko is right in that we haven't seen him use any illusion techniques (and I really think it would be cool if him and his sister were different flame attributes). Annje is Mist. Hans probably will be Storm. I see Saki as being Thunder. That leaves Damiano as Cloud by elimination. I could see him as that, and he uses multiple weapons which could go along with the whole Cloud Flames attribute. But then I wonder about Osamu (I think that was Hibari Spawn's name). Meh, I'll just wait and see.

Anywho, good chapter. I love dodgeball and play it every week at work. Such a dangerous game full of fun and it was pretty nice how you integrated it in.

I also like how you're exploring the characters thoughts more. It's nice to see everyone's point of view. My favorite line had to be from Damiano (who is quickly growing as my favorite character) when he said:

"Is Sorella still psycho?"

Easily the best thing said so far. XD

Anywho, keep it up. Can't wait for the rest.
the Red King
2009-09-16 . chapter 15
Nice chapter a really go way to introduce the ten year bazooka and about the Guardians the only one i'm having trouble finding out his attribute is Damiano the others are fine
Amandy-san
2009-09-16 . chapter 15
Wow, what a love-dovey scene in the end! hahahaha
I think the guys didn't like to see this kind of "hot" scene :P
k'

You know, talking about dodgeball, I played this yesterday in my P.E. class *-*
It was the first time I played! (may seem strange, but here in Brazil isn't a popular sport)
And, right now, my body is aching all over ;_;
But it was really fun :D

About the Guardians... I think Annje is going to be the Mist Guardian, but I'm not sure about this either...
I'm really bad with guessing ^-^"

Please, update asap ;D
Kisu's :**
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