*claps hands* Yay! You're updating!

*claps some more* Yay! Prowl and Jazz are here!

Oi vey. I think I'm starting to get an idea how Bluestreak standing up for himself could lead to his city's destrution. This...is not going to end well.

Cool, Prowls here. It'll be interesting to see how he is, or if there's anyone who recognizes him. This doesn't strike me as a particularly large community, so we'll see.

"...he chased after him anyway, unwilling to allow something he considered his to get away."

I can't help but wonder; does he mean just the cube, or Blue as well?

Ah well. See you next chapter then!

Well you've gotten my attention. Very interesting story. The whole thing about 'Hunters' is kind of a fun idea. Nice. Very well done too. I'll be looking for more. :)

-PR

Good story so far. Interesting and inventive. Keep writing!

Wow, this is really good. I've never seen Bluestreak described as a "hunter" model, but it makes sense to me. It would certainly explain why he's such a crack shot at such a young age. I like his characterization. Shard reminds me of a girl I used to work with. Nobody else could stand her, but I always tried to give her the benefit of the doubt and thus I was the only one she liked.

Didn't stop her from using me to buy pizza's when we were working though.

Silverstreak. Very clever of you. I love big sister/little brother relationships, so I already like this pair. I have a little brother too (ten year difference), so I can relate to Silverstreak here. She may annoy him, but she's bugging him because she loves him. :)

Out of curiosity, what are their approximate ages?